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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #80 on: January 02, 2019, 03:29:03 pm »

Nìsìlpey oe pey atanviri tsawkeyä,
'a'awea atan mipa trrä.
Nìsìlpey oe pey trrìri amip,
'a'awea trr zìsìtä amip.
also 'awvea
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Irayo, fixed.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #81 on: January 02, 2019, 03:33:35 pm »
Yes, because you cannot put the particle a twice on the same side (tsatxon azey a lu le'aw is incorrect).
You could also say a lu zey sì le'aw but it would destroy the beauty.

There's another instance of that but I gave it to poetry.

I'd like to comment on the fact that the way you use the words makes the beauty of your poetry.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #82 on: January 02, 2019, 03:37:19 pm »
Irayo nìmun :)

Yes, because you cannot put the particle a twice on the same side (tsatxon azey a lu le'aw is incorrect).
You could also say a lu zey sì le'aw but it would destroy the beauty.
Ah, yeah, it's true.
Zeya tsatxon a lu le'aw will be better and also correct.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #83 on: January 03, 2019, 04:01:27 pm »
Sresrr'ong

Txon hum neto nìngong,
tawftu sanhì 'erip nìk'ong.

Sresrr'ong apxayopin zera'u,
oeyä tìkangkem hasey lu

Txantura payfyal atanä
terong txepit sanhìyä.

Ayayoyä tìrolro alor,
zera'u nìk'ong trr amip.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #84 on: January 09, 2019, 06:33:34 pm »
Vur suteri ta spono apxay

Maw zìsìt apxay,
ro ayhrr a txanlal.
Tìohakxìl sì sìngäzìkìl apxay
sleykolu ayoeyä tìsopit.

Ayoel zamene txìvìng helkuti
ulte few txampay ahoet
ayoel ramun mipa tìreyti
mì hewonga kifkey a lìm.

Ayoel solop few lehrrap txampay
ne mipa atxkxe a lìm.
Ayoeyä uranit apxay skola'a yrrapìl apxay
nìpxay sute ayoeyä tolerkup.

Nì'aw ayoeyä sute ahol
tìsopìri lehrrap emramey.
Slä nì'i'a fo kllpä lok atykxe amip,
ayspono anarlor nìngay.

Txana krr ayoe roley fìtsenge,
ayoe lamu sute ta hoeta txampay.
Txana krr mì narlora tsatsenge
ayoe mì meoauniaea roley.

Slä krrmaw, maw zìsìt apxay
hetuwong zama'u ne atxkxe ayoeyä.
Ulte moläkxu ayoeyä sìrey
krra fo wamem mì ayspono ayoeyä.

Mawkrr 'oli'a feyä tslam atxan
slä ke 'ami'a ayoeyä sìngäzìk.
Fo poltxe ayoeru fayluta ayoel
sponot ayoeyä zene txivìng.

Mawkrr tslenga tsawke apxay
nrrol io ayoeyä kelku aspuwin.
Frakrr tsatseng layu tsenge luke tìrey,
pumit poltxe ayoeru tsahetuwongìl.

Ayoel rolun mipa kelkuti
mì aypono alahe.
Slä tsaspono 'ayip äo txampay
a fäza'u nìler.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #85 on: February 22, 2019, 04:54:16 am »
Zìskrrtsawnä trr

Oe tìng nari ne taw,
ne tsawke a wäpan
nuä fìwopx awawm.

Trr luke atanvi tsawkeyä,
trr a fpe' ne kllte
tsngawpayti sneyä.

Tìkeftxonga'a yafkeyk,
Vawma trr aö fìwopx,
pxel fpì sìkllyem.


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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #86 on: February 24, 2019, 10:49:23 am »
Txampay ahoet

Ma txampay ahoet a lu ean sì kosman.
Ma txampay atxukx a lu yrr sì lehrrap.
Kifkeyti anarlor ngal wan ro sìtxukx ngeyä.
Keye’ungìri suteyä nìkeftxo ngä zene ngä'än.

Uran apxay wolem mì ayweopx ngeyä,
ulte pum apxay kllkolä nemfa tìtxukx ngeyä.
Sutel ska'a 'änsyema kifkeyt nìtut,
slä fol tsun hivipx ukxoa klltet nì'aw.

Pxaya olo' apxa roley mì paytxew ngeyä.
Pxaya payoang anarlor rey mì sìtxukx ngeyä.
Nga lu kosmana kifkey a nga' ingyentsimit.
Nga lu narlora kifkey a yawne lu oer.
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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #87 on: February 24, 2019, 02:28:59 pm »
Ma Toliman you are an amazing person and i love you!
I love your poems and i will try to learn them all! :D
I also saw last night the Moon! Moon was rising above Romania :D and the color of the Moon was Orange!
Ma Toliman can you make a Poem about Moon in Na'vi language?
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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #88 on: February 24, 2019, 02:35:40 pm »
Irayo :)

Ma Toliman can you make a Poem about Moon in Na'vi language?
I already created:
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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #89 on: February 24, 2019, 11:58:45 pm »
Irayo ma frapo!  :)

Little supplement:


Awesome! Narlor nìtxan ulte sunu oeru nìtxan! Irayo nìtxan ma Toliman! How beautiful poem and picture! :D
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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #90 on: February 25, 2019, 02:54:02 am »
Irayo :) I am glad that you like it!

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #91 on: September 14, 2019, 02:16:59 pm »
Well, I finally forced myself to next Pamrel nìNa'vi so it's here ;D
I hope that it's not full of mistakes and idea is understandable.



Tsenge lok sa'nok anawm
(Tìrey maw tìrey)

Rutxe kea aylì'u atìkeftxonga' oeteri,
tswiva' afpawngit sì aysngumit.
Set tok oel txantsana tsengeti,
mìso ta tìsraw sì tsngawpay.

Oel tok alìm ta ayu a oeru sngolum si,
ulte set fra'u akawng lu alìm ta oe.
Oel tok Eywayä tsengeti,
ulte set sa'nok anawm lu lok oe.

Oeyä tìrey ayngahu lolu txantsan,
pxel tìrey tsun livu nì'aw.
Slä tìlu lok Eywa lu nì'ul sìltsan,
pumit frapo ke tsun tslivam.

Txe'lanur oeyä teya si fpom,
lawnolìl hipx vitrati oeyä.
Tìlu lok Eywa lu sìltsana fpom,
lawnol tì'i'avay krrä.



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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #92 on: September 25, 2019, 02:24:24 pm »
Nice to see you up to writing again ma Toliman :D.
Your writing is really good!
Hope you'll keep it up, want to read more of your texts :D

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #93 on: September 25, 2019, 02:39:01 pm »
Irayo ma Tomke :)

And yeah, I want try create poems nìNa'vi more often again.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #94 on: October 01, 2019, 02:18:47 pm »
Txon oareyä

Krra txon sì oare za'u fìtsenge,
oe nemfa na'rìng tìran nì'awtu.
Ingyenga'a tìseykxel hipx oeti,
ulte heka tìnew lu oeru.

Oe new kivä neto ne ayram,
tsenga oare nrra nìtxanatan.
Ulte mawkrr nìmun ne na'rìng,
tsenga oarel tsre'i ayukit nìtxan.

Tsenge alìm ta aysute akawng,
tsatseng oe new livu.
Tsenge alìm ta ayu akawng,
tsatseng oe new rivey.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #95 on: October 02, 2019, 02:07:37 pm »
Amazing work again!
Sunu oeru nìtxan! :)

Please write even more :D

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #96 on: October 02, 2019, 02:18:16 pm »

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #97 on: October 03, 2019, 03:37:12 pm »
Vawma txon tìkteftxoä

Nì'awtu txonmì avawm
oe 'oralok kllkxem äo oare.
Nì'aw atanit tsraytsyìpä alìm
oel tse'a paytxewro amuve.

Keng oare 'ip mì ton avawm,
ulte yapay slu io faoia yo 'orayä.
Nuä oe tok na'rìngìl avawm,
oel stawm zawrit tusarona ayioangä.

Ya txonä lu paynga' nìtxan,
fayìva zerup ta ayvul ayutralä.
Vitra oeyä lu keftxo nìtxan,
tsngawpay zerup ta menari oeyä.

Le'awa tute ayawne a lamu oeru lu alìm nìtxan
pxel teyra tanhì le'aw a nrr kxamlä yapay.
Slä tsatanhì ale'aw a tsun fko tsive'a set 'erip nìteng
pxel tolatep oel tuteti a lamu yawtetu oey.



It's a bit sad poem but why no...
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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #98 on: October 11, 2019, 12:07:40 am »
Zìskrrtsawn zera'u

Zola'u txon ye'rìn fìtsenge
zìskrrtsawn leru fìtsenge.
Tsawke li ke lu som
ulte rìkxìl 'opinit kolanom.

Zìskrrsomä srr holum neto
mì ayayoyä syal a tswayon neto.
Utralìl hayan sneyä ayrìkxit ye'rìn
na ayayol atxkxet oeyä txayìng ye'rìn.

Txonä atkkxe lu uo pìwopx yapayä
txonä taw lu luke atan sanhìyä.
Wewa trro'ng zaya'u ye'rìn
herwìva a'awve zayup ye'rìn.

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Re: Pamrel ta Toliman
« Reply #99 on: November 26, 2019, 04:53:06 pm »
Atan oareyä

Äo atan oareyä mì tonä taw
Oe klltxay ulte nìn txönä taw

Oeyä vitral tok tsatseng mìkam sanhì
Slä oeyä tokx fìtseng nìtut fkeytok li

Peyä atanìri ateyr oe kanfpìl
Keng ayuk oey lu txewm

Fra'u lu keteng mì atan peyä
Tsa'ul kämunge vitrat oeyä

Leym nantang alìm ne po
Keyl peyä fewi oeti ayunilro

Ulte keftxoa key peyä nrr txonmì...

 

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