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Toliman:
This is my first try about poem nìNa'vi. Probably is not excellent and is with many mistakes, but this is only my first try…
So my poem is named Txewlukea aysawä tìrol - Beauty of endless skies (=the universe).

Txewlukea aysawä tìlor
(Ta Toliman)

Tengkrr tsawke nìk'ong kllkä.
Ayayo sngä'i rivol tìrolit txon'ongä.
Nìlor pxayopina txong'ongmaw
Txon li za'u ulte oel nìn txonä tawit.

Vawma taw hu nìpxay sanhì
Sì nì'ingyenga' narlora kilvan tawä.
Kilvan tawä, atanä payfya akosman
Hu txanatana ayfìwopx sanhìyä.

Kxamlä sä'o fte sanhìt tsive'a
Oel tse'a kifkeyt akosman.
Narlora aysnatanhìtsyìp
Sì ingyenga'a ayfìwopxtsyìp

Oel tse'a alìma aysponot sanhìyä
Ulte tse'a txewlukea kifkeyt.
Oel tse'a atanit li keruseya sanhìyä
Ulte tse'a txukxa 'okrolit.

Explanation of some words:
SpoilerTxewlukea aysaw = the universe ("endless skies")

Kilvan tawä = milky way ("celestial river" - I wanted any original word for milky way then literaly fya'o okupa. On dark sky, milky way really can remember water flow)

Ayfìwopx sanhìyä = "Star Clouds" (= bright structures in milky way)

sä'o fte sanhìt tsive'a = telescope

Spono sanhiyä = galaxy ("stars island")


Translation (for sure):
SpoilerBeauty of the universe

When Sun slowly setting
Birds starts sing evening songs
Beautifuly colorful twilight
Night come and I see on night sky

Dark sky with many of stars
And mysteriously beautiful milky way
Milky way, wonderful flow of light
With bright star clouds

Through telescope
I see wonderful world
Nice star clusters
And mysterious nebulaes

I see far galaxies
And I see endless world
I see light of alreay dead (non exist) stars
And I see (to) deep (ancient) history

Vawmataw:
Txantsana tìkangkem ma Toliman!


--- Quote ---Vawma taw hu nìpxay sanhì
--- End quote ---
Ma oeyä Eywa! Oe lu mì ngeyä pamrel! :o :D :P ;D

Toliman:

--- Quote from: Vawmataw on May 29, 2015, 04:06:05 pm ---Txantsana tìkangkem ma Toliman!
--- End quote ---
Irayo ma Vawmataw  :)


--- Quote from: Vawmataw on May 29, 2015, 04:06:05 pm ---
--- Quote ---Vawma taw hu nìpxay sanhì
--- End quote ---
Ma oeyä Eywa! Oe lu mì ngeyä pamrel! :o :D :P ;D

--- End quote ---
When your nickname is also Dark Sky ...  ;D ;D ;D

Tirea Aean:
This is actually quite awesome! :D

Tìtstewan:

--- Quote from: Tirea Aean on May 29, 2015, 08:43:28 pm ---This is actually quite awesome! :D
--- End quote ---
Fì'u nìwotx!
+1 ma Toliman :)

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