Sìpängkxo ta ayrel arusikx alu Uniltìrantokx

[Sireayä mokri]

why "Neytiri terul nì'awve, ..." ? She doesn't run first time, but first in sequence

First time would be alo a'awve. Nì'awve is just an adverbial form, the one you need here to describe the verb ('awve is an adjective).

About hultstxem I agree, but didn't found something better...

Maybe mäkxu?

[Blue Elf]

why "Neytiri terul nì'awve, ..." ? She doesn't run first time, but first in sequence

First time would be alo a'awve. Nì'awve is just an adverbial form, the one you need here to describe the verb ('awve is an adjective).

Well, understand now...

About hultstxem I agree, but didn't found something better...

Maybe mäkxu?

Not sure - in Czech dictionary we have notice, that this can't be used in meaning "interrupt somebody". But I don't know how old and accurate is this information.

[Sireayä mokri]

Well, yes, it is used with activities, not people (animals as well, I assume). What kind of activities can henten have?

[Blue Elf]

Nothing interesting - they're just sitting and waiting to be disturbed

[Sireayä mokri]

Then maybe we could change the sentence a little bit to get a construction like this: mefol hentenit tsweykayon neto. What do you think?

[Blue Elf]

Then maybe we could change the sentence a little bit to get a construction like this: mefol hentenit tsweykayon neto. What do you think?

Well, that's really good idea. It only sounds like they disturbed and pushed them away intentionally, what I think isn't completely true (I must see that part again). What about:
Mefol hentenit tsweykayon neto luke tìkan. Does it sound weird?

[Sireayä mokri]

No more weird than it would in English, I think

[Blue Elf]

So, corrected, I only changed word order: Eo utral mefol luke tìkan hentenit tsweykayon neto

[Sireayä mokri]

Yeah, seems fine. Presents them to be a little "reckless"

[Alyara Arati]

Yeah, seems fine. Presents them to be a little "reckless"

I think that's a good thing.  They're feeling very playful, yet are in a hurry...

[Sireayä mokri]

It is indeed, just having fun

[Blue Elf]

Tìpängkxo apxeyve (in the mobile laboratory)

Tsyeyk heyn ulte nìn ayrelit. Poan pawm:
- Peu lamen tsanumtsengmì, ma Kìreyse?
- Neytitiyä tsmuke alu Silwanin ftolang kivä numtsengne. Poe stoli furia sawtutel ska'a ayutralit na'rìngmì. 'Awlie poe tolul oene hu hì'ia pongu wawneyna taronyuä a'ewan. Tse, fol skola'a 'awa 'ut a mun'i ayutralit. Fol kxawm fpolìl futa tsun oe tìhawnu sivi foru. Sawtuteyä samsiyu folewi foti vay numtseng. Fol tspolängang Silwaninit nìtxan lok numtseng eo menari Neytiriyä. Ulte lahea suteti nìtengfya. Oel holawnu txampxìt evengä. Slä fo ke tolätxaw li kawkrr.
- Oe 'efu keftxo tsari.
Kìreysel munge 'awa relit ulte yem tsat ne'ìm.
- Tìftiatu zene 'ivì'awm io txele. Fko zenke tivung tì'efur fte iveyk awngati. Slä oel tamìng zìsìtit avomun tìreyä tsanumtsengur. Ayfo solayw oeru Mother.
- ...sa'nok....
- Sa'nok. Tsatìsraw zera'u ftu uniltìrantokx mì sokx oeyä.


Edit: corrections done

[Sireayä mokri]

Tsyeyk heyn ulte nìn ayrelit. Poan pawm:
- Peu lamen tsanumtsengmì, ma Kìreyse?
- Neytitiyä tsmuke alu Silwanin ftolang kivä numtsengne. Poe stoli fwa furia sawtutel ska'a ayutralit na'rìngmì. 'Awlie poe tolul oene hu hì'ia pongu wawneyna taronyuä a'ewan. Tse, fol skola'a 'awa 'ut a mun'i ayutralit. Fol kxawm fpolìl futa tsun oe tìhawnu sivi foru. Sawtuteyä samsiyu folewi foti vay numtsengne. Fol tspolängang Silwaninit nìtxan lok numtseng eo menari Neytiriyä. Ulte lahea suteti nìtengfya. Oel holawnu txampxìt evengä. Slä fo ke tolätxaw li kawkrr.
- Oe 'efu keftxo tsawfpiri.
Kìreysel munge 'awa relit ulte yem tsat ne'ìm.
- Tìftiatu zene 'ivì'awm io txele. Fko zenke tivung tì'efur fte iveyk awngati. Slä oel tamìng zìsìtit avomun tìreyä tsanumtsengur. Ayfo solayw oeru san Mother sìk.
- ...sa'nok....
- Sa'nok. Tsatìsraw zera'u ftu uniltìrantokx mì sokx oeyä.

Txantsan, a great scene, one of the most emotional.

[Blue Elf]

pongu wawneyna taronyuä a'ewan

In movie it is said: "One day she came running with group of young hunters. They were painted". That's why I used it too.

nìtxan lok

"They kill her in the door of the school". I tried to write "very close to school" (Na'vi don't know doors)

'ivì'awm io txele

Well, I didn't found a better way how to say "to be objective". I used Czech quote "to be over the matter", which is very similar.

[Sireayä mokri]

In movie it is said: "One day she came running with group of young hunters. They were painted". That's why I used it too.

I think she was talking about their bodypaint; we don't have a word for it yet.

"They kill her in the door of the school". I tried to write "very close to school" (Na'vi don't know doors)

Nìtxan is an adverb, and just like any adverb, it needs a verb to be related to. The only verb in that sentence is tspang, so I thought it was killed her a lot or something like that. Anyway I'd omit nìtxan here.

Well, I didn't found a better way how to say "to be objective". I used Czech quote "to be over the matter", which is very similar.

That's what I mean, it's too idiomatic, but since we don't have anything better at the moment, I think we could use this.

[Blue Elf]

Ok, corrected.