Sute ke tswayon.

[Puvomun]

Sute ke tswayon.

Tutan a'ewan terìran mì na'ringru. Poan ke lu tsamsiyu, poanil fwew ututi mauti.
Tìran lu ngäzik: fìtsenge klltxe lew si ayvul sì lahea ayu.

Ayoengä 'ewana tutan li zìmup a'aw hrr. Ulte set poan zup nìmun.

"Peu?" Peyä key lu lok 'ewll astxong. Poanil tsame'a fi'uti kawkrr. Pìwopxtsyìp za'u ta 'ewll ulte mì poanri ontu.

"Wiya! Tsa'u fkxake!" 'ewana tutan pllxte. Poanru lu heyn hìkrr. Tì'efu lu mì peyä re'o. Na'ringil leykatem opinit. Ayutral set lu ean. Klltxe lu neyn! Ulte poan nefä kä...

Tutan lìng. Ayutral äo lu, fratseng ayutral lu. Nìteng poanil tse'a ayikranit. Slä... fo heyn mì taw!

"Fo lu kye'ung," ayoengä tutan plltxe. "Ayikran zene tswivayon. Slä fo ke rikx!"

Poanil tse'a tsawketi.

Tsawke atun lrrtok si. "Kelkuro kä, ma hì'ia 'eylan."

Srane. Tsawke eyawr lu. Hawngkrr lu.

"Kelkuro kerä, ma tsawke, irayo lu ngaru."

Klltxe za'u nìwin. Poan zup. "Wiya... nìmun..."

Tutan a'ewan nìn taw. Poan 'ampi re'oru. Tìsraw si. Tutan tse'a 'ewll ahì'i. "Lekye'ung. Fì'u lu 'ewll akxawng!"

Poanil lìyawk fì'ewll. Frapo Na'viyä zene ivomum. Fo ke zene fivahew si fì'ewllit. Sute ke tswayon. Ayikran ke lìng. Ulte tsawke ke lu tun.

Tutanil tse'a tsawket. Set tsawke niltsan lu. Ke lu tun.

[Sireayä mokri]

Tutan a'ewan terìran mì na'ringru. Poan ke lu tsamsiyu, poanil fwew ututi mauti.
Fìkem a tìran lu ngäzik: fìtsenge klltxeru lew si ayvul sì lahea ayu.

Ayoengeyä 'ewana tutan li zìmup a'awa alo hrr. Ulte set poan zup nìmun.

"Peu?" Peyä key lu lok 'ewll astxong. Poanìl ke tsame'a fi'uti kawkrr. Pìwopxtsyìp za'u ta ftu 'ewll ulte mì poanri ontune.

"Wiya! Tsa'u fkxake!" 'ewana tutan plltxe. Poanru lu heyn hìkrr. Tì'efu lu mì feyä re'o. Na'ringìl leykatem opinit. Ayutral set lu ean. Klltxe lu neyn! Ulte poan nefä kä...

Tutan lìng. Ayutral äo lu, fratseng ayutral lu. Nìteng Kop poanìl tse'a ayikranit. Slä... fo heyn mì saw!

"Fo lu lekye'ung," ayoengeyä tutan plltxe. "Ayikran zene tswivayon. Slä fo ke rikx!"

Poanìl tse'a tsawketi.

Tsawke atun lrrtok si. "Kelkurone kä, ma hì'ia 'eylan."

Srane. Tsawkeru tìyawr lu. Hawngkrr lu.

"Kelkurone kerä, ma tsawke, irayo lu ngaru."

Klltxe za'u nìwin. Poan zup. "Wiya... nìmun..."

Tutanìl a'ewan nìn tawti. Poanìl 'ampi re'orut. Tìsraw si. Tutanìl tse'a 'ewllit ahì'i. "Lekye'ung. Fì'u lu 'ewll akxawng!"

Poanìl lìyawk fì'ewllit. Frapo Na'viyä* zene ivomum. Fo ke zene fivahew si 'ivefu fahewit fì'ewllitä.* Sute ke tswayon. Ayikran ke lìng. Ulte tsawke ke lu tun.

Tutanìl tse'a tsawket. Set tsawke niltsan lefpom lu. Ke lu tun.

Tse, pamrel soli nga nìltsan nìngay. Lu keyey, slä fìfya fko nume

Nìsung: ke lu tìkin a sar lì'ut alu poan fralo. Po tsivun tivam nìteng (ulte keng lu sìltsan nì'ul).

[Kamean]

Mllte. Sìltsana vur.

[Puvomun]

Tutan a'ewan terìran mì na'ringru. Poan ke lu tsamsiyu, poanil fwew ututi mauti.
Fìkem a tìran lu ngäzik: fìtsenge klltxeru lew si ayvul sì lahea ayu.

Ayoengeyä 'ewana tutan li zìmup a'awa alo hrr. Ulte set poan zup nìmun.

"Peu?" Peyä key lu lok 'ewll astxong. Poanìl ke tsame'a fi'uti kawkrr. Pìwopxtsyìp za'u ta ftu 'ewll ulte mì poanri ontune.

"Wiya! Tsa'u fkxake!" 'ewana tutan plltxe. Poanru lu heyn hìkrr. Tì'efu lu mì feyä re'o. Na'ringìl leykatem opinit. Ayutral set lu ean. Klltxe lu neyn! Ulte poan nefä kä...

Tutan lìng. Ayutral äo lu, fratseng ayutral lu. Nìteng Kop poanìl tse'a ayikranit. Slä... fo heyn mì saw!

"Fo lu lekye'ung," ayoengeyä tutan plltxe. "Ayikran zene tswivayon. Slä fo ke rikx!"

Poanìl tse'a tsawketi.

Tsawke atun lrrtok si. "Kelkurone kä, ma hì'ia 'eylan."

Srane. Tsawkeru tìyawr lu. Hawngkrr lu.

"Kelkurone kerä, ma tsawke, irayo lu ngaru."

Klltxe za'u nìwin. Poan zup. "Wiya... nìmun..."

Tutanìl a'ewan nìn tawti. Poanìl 'ampi re'orut. Tìsraw si. Tutanìl tse'a 'ewllit ahì'i. "Lekye'ung. Fì'u lu 'ewll akxawng!"

Poanìl lìyawk fì'ewllit. Frapo Na'viyä* zene ivomum. Fo ke zene fivahew si 'ivefu fahewit fì'ewllitä.* Sute ke tswayon. Ayikran ke lìng. Ulte tsawke ke lu tun.

Tutanìl tse'a tsawket. Set tsawke niltsan lefpom lu. Ke lu tun.

Tse, pamrel soli nga nìltsan nìngay. Lu keyey, slä fìfya fko nume

Nìsung: ke lu tìkin a sar lì'ut alu poan fralo. Po tsivun tivam nìteng (ulte keng lu sìltsan nì'ul).

WOU! Less than half is wrong! (I think.) Thank you for all the extensive corrections.

Here are the few things you do not understand: Poan ke lu tsamsiyu, poanil fwew ututi mauti.:  He is no warrior, he looks for push fruit. (I admit, push fruit comes from the ASG so it might be better not to use that.) (edit: and ututi is probably a typo. uti should be enough.)

Poanru lu heyn hìkrr. He has to sit for a while. Which probably is wrong as heyn is used in combination with 'lu'.

Ulte "Lu keyey" ... lu kxeyey...

I shall now spend a while worrying about -re, -ne, -ro and all other little things I still don't know, get and understand well. (NOT! )

And hooray for the spoiler tag. Beneath this is what I intended to say, in English. For the curious among us.

Spoiler

People do not fly.

A young man walks in the forest. He is no warrior, he looks for push fruit.
Walking is difficult, the ground is covered with branches and other things here.

Our young man fell a few times already. And now he falls again.

"What?" His face is close to a strange plant. He has never seen this. A little cloud comes from the plant and in his nose.

"Damn! That itches!" says the young man. He has to sit for a while. There is a strange feeling in his head. The forest changes colours. The trees are blue now. The ground is white! And he goes upwards...

The man floats. Trees are below him, everywhere are trees. He sees banshees as well.

"They are crazy," our man says. "Banshees must fly. But they don't move!"

He looks at the sun.

The red sun smiles. "Go home, my little friend."

Yes. The sun is right. It is late.

"I will go home, sun. Thank you."

The ground comes fast. "Damn... again..."

The young man looks at the sky. He touches his head. It hurts. The man looks at the small plant. "Insane. This is an evil plant!"

He will tell about this plant. All Na'vi must know. They must not smell this plant. People don't fly. Banshees don't hover. And the sun is not red.

The man looks at the sun. The sun is well now. Not red.

[Sireayä mokri]

Here are the few things you do not understand: Poan ke lu tsamsiyu, poanil fwew ututi mauti.:  He is no warrior, he looks for push fruit. (I admit, push fruit comes from the ASG so it might be better not to use that.) (edit: and ututi is probably a typo. uti should be enough.)

I see now. Well, anyway I wouldn't use it

Poanru lu heyn hìkrr. He has to sit for a while. Which probably is wrong as heyn is used in combination with 'lu'.

It should be zene po hiveyn hìkrro.

Ulte "Lu keyey" ... lu kxeyey...

Keyey is short plural form.

[Puvomun]

Poanru lu heyn hìkrr. He has to sit for a while. Which probably is wrong as heyn is used in combination with 'lu'.

It should be zene po hiveyn hìkrro.

Irayo for this!

Ulte "Lu keyey" ... lu kxeyey...

Keyey is short plural form.

Damn, that always gets me... Lenition, I do not like thee!

[Blue Elf]

Nice, ma Puvomun, aren't you from Netherland? 
Just two notes: you often write i instead ì (not big problem as it is very common mistake) and correct name of the fruit from the second sentence is "utu mauti" (into Czech it translates as Pandora's banana)

[Alyara Arati]

WOU! Less than half is wrong! (I think.)

Zerok oel tsatì'efuti nìltsan!  Teya keyeyä lolu oeyä vurtsyìp a'awve!  Ha, seysonìltsan, ma Puvomun, ulte seykxel sì nitram.

[Kamean]

Ma Puvomum, i and ì are quite different from each other.
Maybe I don't сonfuse it, because in Russian are sound which is very close to ì.

[Puvomun]

Nice, ma Puvomun, aren't you from Netherland? 

Yes, I am.

Just two notes: you often write i instead ì (not big problem as it is very common mistake) and correct name of the fruit from the second sentence is "utu mauti" (into Czech it translates as Pandora's banana)

The ì and i... I know... I keep tryìng, and I keep doìng ìt wròng...

[Puvomun]

Ma Puvomum, i and ì are quite different from each other.
Maybe I don't сonfuse it, because in Russian are sound which is very close to ì.

I know they are different, in Dutch the ì sound happens a lot also. Sometimes I think I remember the proper one and do not check against the dictionary...

[Blue Elf]

WOU! Less than half is wrong! (I think.)

Zerok oel tsatì'efuti nìltsan!  Teya keyeyä lolu oeyä vurtsyìp a'awve!  Ha, sesonìltsan, ma Puvomun, ulte seykxel sì nitram.

seysonìltsan, ma Alyara 

[Puvomun]

WOU! Less than half is wrong! (I think.)

Zerok oel tsatì'efuti nìltsan!  Teya keyeyä lolu oeyä vurtsyìp a'awve!  Ha, seysonìltsan, ma Puvomun, ulte seykxel sì nitram.

Irayo, ma Alyara Arati.

Oel fmìyi nìltsan nì'ul hayalo!

[Blue Elf]

Oel fmìyi nìltsan nì'ul hayalo!

Oe fmìyi livu sìltsan nì'ul hayalo
I'll (soon?) try to be good(adj., not adv.) more next time

[Puvomun]

Oel fmìyi nìltsan nì'ul hayalo!

Oe fmìyi livu sìltsan nì'ul hayalo
I'll (soon?) try to be good(adj., not adv.) more next time

I could not decide if sìltsan or nìltsan was the word to use. Thank you.
I just wanted to say "I'll try". Looks like today is one of those days that oeyä eltu Na'viyä lu kawng...

[Blue Elf]

I just wanted to say "I'll try". Looks like today is one of those days that oeyä eltu Na'viyä lu kawng...

HRH don't worry, I have these days every time I try to write anything nìNa'vi here Nearly impossible to write something completely correctly

[Tanri]

Ma Puvomun, fì'u lu txantsana vur a lu eltur tìtxen si nìngay. 

Lu oeru 'awa tìpawm ngaru:
Faylì'uri alu san Fo ke zene fivahew si fì'ewllit sìk, srake nga namew sivar kemlì'uti san ke zene sìk tup san zene ke?

[Sireayä mokri]

Oel fmìyi nìltsan nì'ul hayalo!

I believe it's correct, apart from agentive case. If you try to say I will try to do better next time, then you can also add tsakem sivi after fmi, but it's not necessary, since it will be implied anyway.

[Puvomun]

Ma Puvomun, fì'u lu txantsana vur a lu eltur tìtxen si nìngay. 

Lu oeru 'awa tìpawm ngaru:
Faylì'uri alu san Fo ke zene fivahew si fì'ewllit sìk, srake nga namew sivar kemlì'uti san ke zene sìk tup san zene ke?

Oel kin puk aylì'fyayä set... (nìmun )
I could not find "namew" anywhere, nor anything that looks remotely like it, so I have to guess here. I assume you want to know why I used "ke zene" instead of "zene ke". And the answer is: I don't have a reason. Free word order and all that is my only defense...

[Sireayä mokri]

Ke zene and zene ke have a difference in meaning. Ke zene means don't have to (not necessary); zene ke is used for must not (prohibited).

  Ke zene nga hivum.
  You don't have to leave (you can stay).

  Nga zene ke hivum.
  You must not leave (you must stay).

I could not find "namew" anywhere, nor anything that looks remotely like it

It's n<am>ew — wanted.