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Swaw Nì'aw
« on: October 03, 2011, 01:35:24 am »
Tutanìl a'ewan nolìn tawit swawo, tsakrr molìn fte tsive'a keyit tutéyä.  San sleru hawngkrr sìk po poltxe.

San srane sìk tuté 'oleyng san nìngay sìk.

San fpìl oel futa sweylu txo oe hivum sìk.

Poe poltxe san oel omum sìk.

Po hasey soli tìnusäkur ulte kllkxolem.  Tutéri nìteng, ulte nolong poti ne tseng tìfpxusäkìmä.  San tse, lu zìsìt nì'aw sìk 'ewana tutan poltxe.

San ngaru tìyawr sìk.  Poel frolìp seyrit sneyä ulte stolo futa nivìn menarit peyä.

Po fmoli nìmun.  San ngaru pamrel sayi oe sìk.

San oel omum sìk poe poltxe nìtsìsyì ulte molìn neto.

Pol yolem tsyokxit sneyä sìn 'etnaw poeyä, ftolang hìkrro, tsakrr rolixk fte kllkxivem eo poe.  Tuté tstu soli ulte piak soli menariru sneyä 'a'awa alo ulte nì'i'a nolìn mefumit peyä.  San oeru txoa livu; kawkrr ke kolan oe... sìk.

San oel omum sìk.  Po lrrtok soli ulte kolä fte zamivunge sneyä pxenit a wä sìwew.  San oeru solunu fìtxon sìk.  Tutanìl tsapxenit yolemstokx.  Poel nolìn pot luke aylì'u.  San syayaw ngaru fa skxaype trray srekrr oe hum ulte ngaru pamrel sayi oe nì'awve krr a oe pähem sìk.

Tuté holangham.  San kehe, nga tsamehem ke sayi.  Trray nga 'ayìn hu soaia ngeyä, ulte ngal omum futa zayene nga tìkangkem sivi ta swaw a pähem nga.  Furia krrit run, etrìpa syayvi sìk.

San pxeupxareri pamrel soli oe ngaru alo aham, kefyak?  Fì'u lu 'aw mevospxìo.  Oeri fì'u lu sìltsan sìk.

Tuté a'ewan ke molte.  San kehe, fì'u lolu 'aw vospxìo tengkrr pxevospxì solalew ulte tsakrr ke'u kaw'it vaykrr nga tolätxaw ne kelku sìk.

San slä oe ngaru syolaw fa skxaypxe stum pxìm to tsaw tengkrr pxevospxì asyen solalew, ha fì'u nìngay lu txantsan nang sìk.

San srane, slä 'upxareri nga poltxe ulte ayfì'u ke lolu pamrel ki sìpängkxo fa skxaypxe sìk.  Poe lrrtok soli nìtxan.  San lu tìketeng.  Kxawm ke tsranten oeru, ngian mi fkeytok sìk.

San tam, ma oeyä... 'eylan sìk.  Po sngolä'i kivä ne wrrpa.  Tutél ftolem poti ulte kllkxolem na ekxan fya'oä peyä.  Ayherwìva zolup sìn nikre poeyä.

San ma skxawngtsyìp, tivätxaw nemfa kelku.  Nga slayu wew nìftxan na tskxepay sìk.

San oe kawkrr ke 'efu wew sìk poe poltxe.  San ngal omum tsat sìk.

San slä oe fìkem si sìk 'oleyng tutan a yolem mepunit poepxaw fte mefoti 'awstengyivem.  Mefo 'olì'awn fìfya asim txankrr.  Tsakrr pol molunge mesyokxit poeyä ulte 'olärìp mefì'ut mìkam tokx mefeyä.  San oeru lom layu nga sìk.

Tuté piak soli kxaru sneyä ulte tsakrr tstu soli nìmun.  Ya aku'up a ta kxa poeyä lolu yapay a fnolu.  San nìngay sìlpey oe tsnì nga fìkem sivi talun ngaru layu lom oe nìtxan sìk.

San oe pamrel sasyi sìk.

San spaw oel futa li ngal poltxe tsaylì'ut sìk.  Poe holawl fte tivätxaw nemfa.  San fpìl oel futa sweylu txo nga hivum set sìk.

San tolel!  Oel olomum fì'ut.  Nga 'efu wew sìk.

Menaril poeyä wolìntxu säsrätxit ahì'i nì'aw.  San oe ke 'efu, slä txo nga hivum mì rewon, ngaru lu tìkin a hahaw sìk.

San srane, skxakep ngaru tìyawr.  Oe...  oeru lom layu nga sìk.

San ayunil akalin sìk poe poltxe nì'ango, tsakrr molìn ulte kolä nemfa kelku.

« Last Edit: November 02, 2011, 05:16:49 pm by Alyara Arati »
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2011, 09:23:54 am »
Wou, pamrel atxantsan, nì'i'a tse'eia ngeyä vurit amip, ma Alyara :)

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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #2 on: October 03, 2011, 09:44:05 am »
Ma Alyara, fì'u lu vur a tsìyevun slivu mì sìrey. Sunu oeru nìtxan, slä oel rolun hola kxeyeyit mesyokxä a sleyku futa ke lu ftue stä'nì ralit vurä.


Po hasey soli naerur -> sounds like "he finished drink" (as he was preparing some drink), but probably better would be "Po hasey soli tìnusäk" (he finished drinking) - or not?

Tutäri nìteng, ulte nolong poti ne tseng aspusäkìm -> you probably mean: Tutéri nìteng... I didn't found what is aspusäkìm (a-sp<us>äkìm), can you explain? i tried to dismatle it from all sides, but... :(

Pol yolem tsyokxit sneyä sìn 'etnaw poeyä, ftäpolang hìkrro, tsakrr rolixk fte klltxivem eo poe

pahem should be pähem (twice)
säsratx should be säsrätx
Fì'u lu pum mì mevospxì here "pum" is unclear, maybe 'aw is better?

Still good vur (and, sorry for saying this, it's good to see that I'm not the only who makes mistakes ;D)

Hmm, Sireayä mokri was faster than me :(
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #3 on: October 03, 2011, 09:52:51 am »
but probably better would be "Po hasey soli tìnusäk" (he finished drinking) - or not?

Probably, with dative.
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2011, 06:16:49 pm »
Wiya! :-[  Slä furia keyeyit oeyä rolun, irayo nìtxan ma mesmukan. :)  I didn't realize I was too sleepy to type, but apparently this was the case. :P  It should all be fixed now, I think. ;)
« Last Edit: October 03, 2011, 06:39:45 pm by Alyara Arati »
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #5 on: October 04, 2011, 02:00:01 am »
Txopu si oe fwa tì'eyng lu san kehe. "...ulte nolong poti ne tseng afpusäkìm."
Txo ral fìlì'ukìnga livu nì'ìnglìsì: "... followed him to entrance/exit (entering place or something like this)", lì'u aeyawr zene livu afpxusäkìm
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #6 on: October 04, 2011, 08:53:27 am »
Txopu si oe fwa furia tì'eyng lu san kehe. "...ulte nolong poti ne tseng afpusäkìm."
Txo ral fìlì'ukìngä livu nì'ìnglìsì: "... followed him to entrance/exit (entering place or something like this)", lì'u aeyawr zene livu afpxusäkìm

"Entering place" here would mean "a place that enters", not "a place by means of one enters". So I guess the best way to deal with it is to translate the latter expression: tseng a tsawfa fkol fpxäkìm.
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #7 on: October 04, 2011, 10:53:01 am »
Kosman ma Aylara. Suneiu oer nìtxan. :)
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Re: Swaw Nì'aw
« Reply #8 on: October 04, 2011, 12:04:47 pm »
Irayo ma Kamean.  :D  I'll try to think of something easier to say than "entrance", but thanks for the correct phrase ma Sireayä mokri.  :)
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