Tererkup

Started by Blue Elf, July 16, 2011, 05:06:32 PM

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Blue Elf

Following text is inspired by some Czech songs, where one sings about things related to death. These are: Umírám (I'm dying) by Buty, Jednou (Once) by Olympic and Smrt (Death) from Dracula musical.
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Tererkup.
Tìtxurìl txerìng oeti.
Oel stawm Eywayä mokrit a syaw oeru.
Ye'rìn oeyä tirea tayul ne poe ulte tokx 'ayì'awn fìtseng.
Oeri tsawke slayu neyn, oel tayok tsatsenget nì'awtu.
Nawma Sa'nok payawm oeru san pefya nga roley ngeyä tìreyur?
Lolu nga tute a lu srung-susi sì txantslusam fu skxawng nì'aw? sìk.
Ulte ke layu ftue fwa taryìng tì'eyng aeyawr....

Tererkängup.
Ma yawntu, munge oeyä tsyokxit nemfa ngeyä pum,
ulte rìlyol oeru ngeyä tìrolit.
Lrrtok sivi vaykrr txe'lanur lu 'ekong mi,
fte oeyä 'ok ator livu lor.
Tìterkup tìsraw si nìhawng,
slä txo tse'a oel keyit ngeyä,
tsaw lu ftue nì'ul.

Tererkängup.
Oeyä kxitx 'eykayefu keftxo ngaru,
slä ke lu tìrey luke kxitx
ulte ke lu kxitx luke tìrey.
Sutel terel krrit ta Eywa fte rivey.
Tuteoru lu krr ayol, tuteoru lu krr atxan.
Krr oeyä lolu txan slä set...
Tsaw 'eri'a.

Tererkängup.
Tse'a oel fayìvat mì menari ngeyä,
slä rä'ä tsngawvìk, rutxe.
Sayunu oeru txo oel fayrrfen oeti
mì ngeyä ayunil.
Tse, lu fra'ur sneyä tì'i'a.
Oe zene hivawl oeti
fte kivä ne fya'o ator.

Tererkängup.
Tìng tora tìpomit oeru.
Oeyä tokx sì txe'lan sleru meyp.
Awnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw nemfa hllte.
Nawma Sa'nok syaw, syaw oeru poene,
srake stawm tsamokrit?
Oe zene kivä...
Eywa ngahu, ma yawntu...

Edit: some corrections
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

QuoteTse'a oel fayìvat mì menari ngeyä,
slä ke tsngawvìk, rutxe.

Zene oe tsngivawvìk nì'it talun fì'u lu fìtxan kalin sì keftxo. :'(
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Ftxavanga Txe′lan

....Ma Blue Elf, fì'ul nìngay skama'a txe'lanit oeyä, ulte lameiu lor nìtxan nìteng. :( :) Sìltsana *poem*, ma 'eylan, tsa yawne lu oer. :D

Puvomun

:(

Lu lora *poem*, ma Blue Elf, slä lu keftxo atxan nìtxan...
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Sireayä mokri

Txantsan leiu nìngay ma Blue Elf. Nìngay tseiun fko 'ivefu sì'efuti a fì'ul nga'. Seysonìltsan.

Nìsung:

Quote from: Blue Elf on July 16, 2011, 05:06:32 PM
Nawma Sa'nok payawm oetiru san pefya nga roley ngeyä tìreyur?
Lolu nga tute a lu asrung-susi* sì txantslusam fu skxawng nì'aw? sìk.
Ulte ke layu ftue fte fwa tsivun tivìng tì'eyng aeyawr....
...
ulte rìlyol oeru ngeyä tìrolit.
Lrrtok sivi vaykrr txe'lanur lu 'ekong* mi,
...
Tsaw 'eri'a.
...
slä ke rä'ä tsngawvìk, rutxe.
...
Tse, lu fra'ur tseyä sneyä tì'i'a.
...
Awnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw hllte.
...
srake stawm tsamokrit?
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Blue Elf

Prrte' oeru fwa fìpamrel sunu ngaru.

QuoteNawma Sa'nok payawm oetiru san pefya nga roley ngeyä tìreyur?
So pawm is intransitive? (not marked in dictionary)
QuoteLolu nga tute asrung-susi sì txantslusam fu skxawng nì'aw? sìk
But if I use it this way, adjective txantslusam stays alone after connector without lu. Is It possible?
and i think srung-susi works as adjective - that's why I used it with lu and sì and another adjective (I know it is not gramatic, but in poetry.... you know  :))
QuoteAwnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw mì hllte.
"Into" would be the best - it is variation of "We are dust and we return to dust".
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Sireayä mokri

Quote from: Blue Elf on July 18, 2011, 10:17:48 AM
So pawm is intransitive? (not marked in dictionary)

Pawm is transitive, but is used without agentive/patientive when is paired with san...sìk.

Quote from: Blue Elf on July 18, 2011, 10:17:48 AM
I know it is not gramatic, but in poetry.... you know  :)

Well, yeah, you can keep it in this case, if you feel that it fits the rhythm better.
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Kamean

Keftxoyä tìlor. :'(
Nìngay leiu txantsan. :)
Quote from: Puvomun on July 18, 2011, 09:04:40 AM
slä ke lu tìrey luke kxitx
ulte ke lu kxitx luke tìrey.
Ngaru tìyawr.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

säfpìl alor ma Elf. oeti tolakuk txe'lanmì.
pamrel ke si oe nìtxan talun aylì'ut ke tsun rivun.
Quote from: Blue Elf on July 18, 2011, 10:17:48 AM
QuoteAwnga za'u ta kllte ulte tätxaw mì hllte.
"Into" would be the best - it is variation of "We are dust and we return to dust".
then use nemfa.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Blue Elf

QuoteLu lora *poem*, ma Blue Elf, slä lu keftxo atxan nìtxan...
QuoteKeftxoyä tìlor.
Srane, lu keftxo fìpamrel taluna plltxe teri tuteyä ayu ator. Tìrey lu keftxo krro rro, ke lu ftxozä fratrr.
Awngal ke tok fìtsenget frakrro, a fì'ut sweylu txo fkol ivomum.

Slä rä'a 'efu keftxo, oeyä vur ahay lefpom layu nì'ul.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Kamean

Quote from: Blue Elf on July 18, 2011, 03:50:37 PM
Slä rä'a 'efu keftxo, oeyä vur ahay lefpom layu nì'ul.
Ngaru tìyawr. :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.