@TireaAean #vur

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Blue Elf

nìteng sunu oeru fìvur, ma Alyara. Ayvurìri nga tsulfätu lu am'aluke :)
Ngaru ftxozä lefpom
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tanri

Quote from: Alyara Arati on November 24, 2011, 11:22:14 AM
Here is a bit more, before I take a break for the Thanksgiving Holiday. :)  For everyone who celebrates Thanksgiving, have a great holiday! :D  For the majority of you who aren't from the U.S., may you be blessed at this time with many good things for which you can be thankful! :-*
Quote from: Tirea Aean on November 24, 2011, 02:42:26 PM
wow! amazing! o how this story has grown! :D Irayo nitxan ma Alyara Arati! :D
Also, the same to you :) I am thankful for many things, among them is certainly you and the rest of this community.

...and let the destiny guide us to do things worthy of thanks, but never for thanks alone...
na frakem a menga seri fpi awnga nìwotx, ma Alyara sì Tirea :)
Irayo seiyi ulte ayftxozä lefpom frapor!

Nìngay fìvur leiu kosman nìtxan. Frakrr a oel inan fìvurit, oel tswera' futa lì'fyaru leNa'vi lu hola lì'u nì'aw to fralì'fya alahe 'Rrtayä. Lam oeru fwa tsavurmì ke tsun livu kaw'it kea 'u sì kem a ke tsun sliva'tsu awnga fa lì'fya leNa'vi.
Tätxawyu akì'ong.

Alyara Arati

Irayo seiyi, ma smukan, nìtxan nìwotx. :D :-* :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

Mipa zìsìt; vur nì'ul. ;D

What do you all think?  Should I stop here? :-\
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Tirea Aean

I don't know. Does it have a resolved plot? ;)

Alyara Arati

Skxakep kehe.  If you want to be critical, perhaps it never had much of a plot at all.  If you want to be open-minded, then there's always room for more so long as the addition makes the story better and not just longer. ;)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Tirea Aean

#86
true  ;)

you should by no means feel obligated to write any more. if and only if you want to, go ahead. I am most definitely thankful for all you have done. :D

Blue Elf

Quote from: Alyara Arati on January 02, 2012, 02:30:19 PM
Mipa zìsìt; vur nì'ul. ;D
Txantsan - vur verar :)

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What do you all think?  Should I stop here? :-\
I vote for no, but as TA wrote - continue if you feel it is good idea, stop if if you feel you should. But I like the story and am curious how it will continue...

Some ideas/corrections (sorry for nitpicking):
- to is used for comparison, like "X to Y lu adjective/ X is more adj. than Y". Here is missing adj. part although one can understand what you mean (nì'ul fits here)
Kxawm 'uo to tì'o'.  Kxawm nìteng 'uo to 'eylan nì'aw.
...taluna oeng lu 'uo to 'eylan letrrtrr

- ...trr fte pivängkxo 'awsìiteng
- Tsun oe syäpivaw tireylan ngeyä luke am'a.
- tireylan -> I'd use tirea'eylan (same pattern as tireaioang, tireafya'o)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Quote from: Blue Elf on January 02, 2012, 03:57:44 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on January 02, 2012, 02:30:19 PM
Mipa zìsìt; vur nì'ul. ;D
Txantsan - vur verar :)

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What do you all think?  Should I stop here? :-\
I vote for no, but as TA wrote - continue if you feel it is good idea, stop if if you feel you should. But I like the story and am curious how it will continue...

Some ideas/corrections (sorry for nitpicking):
- to is used for comparison, like "X to Y lu adjective/ X is more adj. than Y". Here is missing adj. part although one can understand what you mean (nì'ul fits here)
Kxawm 'uo to tì'o'.  Kxawm nìteng 'uo to 'eylan nì'aw.
...taluna oeng lu 'uo to 'eylan letrrtrr

- ...trr fte pivängkxo 'awsìiteng
- Tsun oe syäpivaw tireylan ngeyä luke am'a.
- tireylan -> I'd use tirea'eylan (same pattern as tireaioang, tireafya'o)

Irayo ma oeyä 'eylan! :D  And don't feel that you're nitpicking; I really appreciate that you take the time and read carefully enough to catch my errors. ;D
Apparently I have a problem with the use of the word "to". :-[  But I'm glad that you can understand me in spite of that. :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci