Tompat Pom (Kiss the Rain)

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Alyara Arati

Billie Myers - Kiss The Rain


Tompat Pom (aylì'u)

Kaltxì
Srak ngal stawm oet?
Tsun tslivam nga oeti srak?
Kaltxì
Srak lu hawngkrr?
Hangham tuteo tsatseng
Srak nì'awtu tok nga set?
Talun
Fmi oeyktivìng
'Uo fe'
Lu; mokri ngeyä hek
Rutxe nga
Rutxe nga
Wrrpa kä
Wrrpa kä
Tompat pom
Krr a oeti kin ngal
Tompat pom
Krr a oe lìm nìhawng
Txo kxal ngey
'Ivefu tìvängit
Tompat pom
Trr'ongìri pey
Zerok mi
Ngal futa teng lu taw
Ulte ton
Ke lu txanwawe oer nìteng
Tìpusey
Vay rewon lu ngäzìk
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Kaltxì
Lom lu ngar srak?
Nga peng san srane sìk
Slä lam fwa oer lu lom nì'ul
Pefya
Za'u yafkeyk?
'Eko tompa srak tsatseng?
Pam ngey oeri sim slä alìm
Fìtxan lam nga
Tsrivanten srake fì'u
Txo ngal oey
Ayronsrelit ivomum
Ronsemmì
Ronsemmì
Pivom srak
Pivom srak
Tompat ngal
Nga zivup oeka
Oeri fpìl
Oeri fpìl
Oeri fpìl
Ngal nì'aw
Tompat pom
Krr a oeti kin ngal
Tompat pom
Krr a oe lìm nìhawng
Txo kxa ngey
'Ivefu ohakx set
Tompat pom
Trr'ongìri pey
Zerok mi
Ngal futa teng lu saw
Ulte ton
Ke lu txanwawe oer nìteng
Tìpusey
Vay rewon lu ngäzìk
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
o...............
Tompat pom
o...............
Tompat pom
Kaltxì
Srak ngal stawm oet?
Srak ngal stawm oet?
Srak ngal stawm oet?
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Sireayä mokri

Sunu oer fìtìrol, ngal omum, ma Alyara, ulte tìralpengìri irayo ngar nìngay :)

When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Blue Elf

Ooh, ma Alyara, lu txantsan ngeyä tìralpeng!

mesäfpìlo:
- Zerok mi Ngal futa lu tenga taw
- If you feel you can´t wait till morning ~ Txo ngal 'ivefu futa ke tsun pivey vay rewon
fu: Rewonìri txo nga 'ivefu futa ke tsun pivey
fu: Rewonìri txo nga ke tsivun pivey
fu: txo nga ke tsivun pivey var rewon
fu: ....... tsun tivam :)

Sunu oeru fìpamrel.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Alyara Arati

Irayo seiyi nìtxan, ma pxesmukan, tìmokìri nìpxi. :D :D :D

Sadly, I couldn't make any of those fit both the meter and emphasis of the song's rhythm, so I made slightly different changes, but hopefully everything is fixed now. :) :) :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Sìlatem atxantslusam :)
Tse, fko tsun rivol fìtìrol? (ke fmoli oel tsat)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Srane, ma Blue Elf, lu tsukrol.  I was careful to match the Na'vi to the original song. ;D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Then.... congratulation :) It's really not easy
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Sireayä mokri

Quote from: Blue Elf on September 17, 2011, 04:06:01 PM
Then.... congratulation :) It's really not easy

Nìngay, ha tsulfä lu ngar, ma Alyara :)
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Puvomun

Wou! Txantsan. Tsa'u lamu txana tìkangkem!!
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Alyara Arati

#10
Quote from: Alyara Arati on September 16, 2011, 07:34:09 PM
Billie Myers - Kiss The Rain


Tompat Pom (aylì'u)

Kaltxì
Oet ngal stawm srak?
Tsun tslivam nga oeti srak?
Kaltxì
Hawngkrr lu srak?
Hangham tuteo tsatseng
Srak nì'awtu tok nga set?
Talun
Fmi oeyktivìng
'Uo fe'
Lu; mokri ngeyä hek
Rutxe nga
Rutxe nga
Wrrpa kä
Wrrpa kä
Tompat pom
Krra oeti kin ngal
Tompat pom
Krra oe lìm nìhawng
Txo kxal ngey
'Ivefu tìvängit
Tompat pom
Trr'ongìri pey
Zerok mi
Ngal futa teng lu saw
Ulte ton
Ke lu txanwawe oer nìteng
Tìpusey
Vay rewon lu ngäzìk
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Kaltxì
Lom lu ngar srak?
Nga peng san srane sìk
Ngian ke mì fya'o ateng
Pefya
Za'u yafkeyk?
'Eko tompa srak tsatseng?
Pam ngey oeri sim slä alìm
Fìtxan lam nga
Tsrivanten srake fì'u
Txo ngal oey
Ayronsrelit ivomum
Ronsemmì
Ronsemmì
Pivom srak
Pivom srak
Tompat ngal
Nga zivup oeka
Oeri fpìl
Oeri fpìl
Oeri fpìl
Ngal nì'aw
Tompat pom
Krra oeti kin ngal
Tompat pom
Krra oe lìm nìhawng
Txo kxa ngey
'Ivefu ohakx li
Tompat pom
Trr'ongìri pey
Zerok mi
Ngal futa teng lu saw
Ulte ton
Ke lu txanwawe oer nìteng
Tìpusey
Vay rewon lu ngäzìk
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
Tompat pom
o...............
Tompat pom
Kaltxì
Oet ngal stawm srak?
Oet ngal stawm srak?
Oet ngal stawm srak?

I changed the words a tiny bit in order to make it easier for me to sing. ;)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Quote from: Alyara Arati on October 27, 2012, 07:24:19 AM
I changed the words a tiny bit in order to make it easier for me to sing. ;)
Ha, furia ngal ralyol fìtìrolit, awnga tsun pivey, srak? It would be nice (although today's rain didn't make me happy...)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

#12
Irayo ma 'eylan oeyä.  Nìngay, li hasey soli.  Tìfmil a'awve tok fìtsengit.

Pxiset tìkangkem seri fte ngivop tìrolit sìltsan nì'ul nì'it.  Fpìl oel futa lìyu alaksi fì'u fìha'ngir stum pxiswamay. :D

Edit:  Tompat Pom
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Blue Elf

Nìngay, nga rol nìfya'o alor! Sunu oeru nìtxan!
It would be fantastic to add music too (It is a little problem, I there's no available instrumental version). Also, some of your ejectives are ejective not enough, but still great work - big applause.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Irayo nìtxan! :D  Yes, I know that there is no instrumental version available; I did look hard for one. :(

And you're right.  I have a tremendous problem singing ejectives.  I had to lay down a track with ejectives only for "Key, 'Etnaw, Kinamtil." :P
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

If you can find that song recorded by some specific way, music still can be added. I'll try to find details and send them to you.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Done, my friend, to the best of my ability.  Hopefully this version is much better. :D

Tompat Pom (Kiss the Rain)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Really, sounds better. But music is still missing (or was muted together with original voice). I'll try some experiments on weekend, and if I'll be successful, maybe I post some result here too :) Your voice is very pleasant!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Kamean

I totally agree with Blue elf. :)
But music, really, it's better to do a little louder.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.