tried making a poem?

[Syulang]

I had to use the dictionary  probably completely butchered it 

Hufwe, tsawke si tompa   
Kato lu rey'eng   
Lor 'ekong
Teya si ngaru tirea
Teya si ngaru tirea   

meant to mean:

wind, sun and rain
the rythm of The Balance of Life
the beautiful beat
fills your spirit
fills your spirit

[Txonä Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì]

I had to use the dictionary  probably completely butchered it 

Hufwe, tsawke si tompa   
Kato lu rey'eng   
Lor 'ekong
Teya si ngaru tirea
Teya si ngaru tirea   

meant to mean:

wind, sun and rain
the rythm of The Balance of Life
the beautiful beat
fills your spirit
fills your spirit

Just a few small errors:

Hufwe, tsawke siì tompa   
Kato lu rey'engä   
Lora 'ekong
Teya si ngarueyä tirearu
Teya si ngarueyä tirearu

That's a very nice poem, did you make that up yourself?

-Txonä Rolyu

[Ftxavanga Txe′lan]

That's very nice, ma Syulang! If ever you do write poetry/texts and want to share more of them (nìNa'vi or in English), these subforums might be of interest to you.

[Sireayä mokri]

Another poetry writer? Txantsan

[Syulang]

Irayo, ma ayeylan  Irayo Txona, for the corrections. yeah, I try to write poetry, in English of course. They're not always great  the type of poem I write usually depends on my current emotions. I had to use the dictionary to write all of that though! 

[Ftxavanga Txe′lan]

I had to use the dictionary to write all of that though! 

That's perfectly normal. You'll see that, with time, you will need the dictionary less and less.

[Txonä Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì]

I had to use the dictionary to write all of that though! 

That's perfectly normal. You'll see that, with time, you will need the dictionary less and less.

This is sooo true! When I was first starting out I had to use the dictionary for like every other word but I kept at it and kept practicing and now I hardly use it at all. Keep practicing and the same will be true for you too. Looks like you're on your way already

-Txonä Rolyu

Tìsung: You're welcome
Also there are errors in the translation of the phrase about the storm, as I suspected there would be. Check the thread again, someone more advanced than me has made another translation

[Tirea Aean]

nice work.

for future ref, there's a board for posting na'vi literature.

[Syulang]

thanks, i know.   i posted a 'lullaby' there.

edit: i think i posted it in the fanfiction section. oh well! 

[Tirea Aean]

i like the flow of Na'vi literature goin on around here.

thanks, i know.  i posted a 'lullaby' there.

edit: i think i posted it in the fanfiction section. oh well! 

Close enough. I think Pamrel nìna'vi nì'aw is a childboard of Fanfic

[Alyara Arati]

Great, another poet!  Very nice, ma tsmuke!

[Syulang]

Great, another poet!  Very nice, ma tsmuke!

you write poetry too?  have you put any on here? yes i like to write my own poems, fanfics and stories. 

[Tirea Aean]

Great, another poet!  Very nice, ma tsmuke!

you write poetry too?  have you put any on here? yes i like to write my own poems, fanfics and stories. 

a lot of her work can be found on that board I talked about earlier.

nice work.

for future ref, there's a board for posting na'vi literature.

[Syulang]

I'd have a hard time understanding it lol - it's all in Na'vi 

[Tirea Aean]

I'd have a hard time understanding it lol - it's all in Na'vi 

not sure why that is, because only the literary work itself needs to be in na'vi according to the posting guidelines...

[Txonä Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì]

I'd have a hard time understanding it lol - it's all in Na'vi 

not sure why that is, because only the literary work itself needs to be in na'vi according to the posting guidelines...

I think that's what she was referring to...the litterary work.

-Txonä Rolyu

[Tirea Aean]

I'd have a hard time understanding it lol - it's all in Na'vi 

not sure why that is, because only the literary work itself needs to be in na'vi according to the posting guidelines...

I think that's what she was referring to...the litterary work.

-Txonä Rolyu

I figured she was saying the reason why moving it there would be bad is because everyone would be commenting on it in Na'vi...

OHH. I see. This is true.