Poemtsyìp

Started by Tirea Aean, August 02, 2011, 09:40:53 PM

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Tirea Aean

Oeri vitra slele mì sìyawn
Fìtsenge ngahu new 'ivì'awn
Mikyunur mokri ngey teya si
Txe'lanur leiu soma txepvi

Ngari tirea srew pxaw pum oey
Leiu ftue fwa tswiva' kifkey
Fra'u fnu a fì'u tsun tivam
Oel ngati kameie ulte tslam

'Oma Tirea

* 'Oma Tirea sunu fìpoem

:D

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ÌTXTSTXRR!!

Srake serar le'Ìnglìsìa lì'fyayä aylì'ut?  Nari si älofoniru rutxe!!

Alyara Arati

Lor fìtxan nang!  Kalin sì tireanga'!  Seysonìltsan! :D :D :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Ke lu oeru aylì'u ake... lu txantsan nì'aw! Sunu oeru nìtxan, nga lu tsulfätu - kawtu ke tsun pivlltxe fwa fì'u ke lu tìngay!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Puvomun

Wou... nga lu "poem"tu!
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

nìngay one of the best I've read. when I read this I can't help myself but feel joy.

and by the way
Quote from: Blue Elf on August 03, 2011, 02:06:07 AM
Ke lu oeru aylì'u ake... lu txantsan nì'aw! Sunu oeru nìtxan, nga lu tsulfätu - kawtu ke tsun pivlltxe fwa fì'u ke lu tìngay!
what??
actually I also thought about the possibility of writing kea like that. it does look like ke transformed into an adjective. however, as far as I know, we don't do it.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Ftxavanga Txe′lan

Quote from: Alyara Arati on August 02, 2011, 10:00:16 PM
Lor fìtxan nang!  Kalin sì tireanga'!  Seysonìltsan! :D :D :D

Mllte oel. :D Fìpamrel txantsan nìtxan nang, ma Tirea! :)

Ekirä

Aylì'ur ngeyä lu kato alor. Seysonìltsan. :D

Tirea Aean

Ayngar oe seiyi irayo!  :D

Sireayä mokri

Nìngay lu pum atxantsan ma Tirea, vivar rutxe :)
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Kamean

Ma Tìrea, ngeyä "poem" sunu oer nìtxan nang! Seysonìltsan! :)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Blue Elf

Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on August 03, 2011, 05:27:35 AM
Quote from: Blue Elf on August 03, 2011, 02:06:07 AM
Ke lu oeru aylì'u ake... lu txantsan nì'aw! Sunu oeru nìtxan, nga lu tsulfätu - kawtu ke tsun pivlltxe fwa fì'u ke lu tìngay!
what??
actually I also thought about the possibility of writing kea like that. it does look like ke transformed into an adjective. however, as far as I know, we don't do it.
Kea is adjective, so ake should be possible (we have it in Czech dictionary, although it is not present in "main" dictionary)
TBH I used this form intentionaly to see reactions :) Discussion is way how to make things clear - this form is not commonly used, so I'm curious if it is correct
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tirea Aean

#12
I agree that discussion is great but that also causes threads to derail from OP. (which is why I quoted the above few posts and made a new topic in /beginners/ to develop such discussion. And I too am curious as to what others will say about it there ;))

Blue Elf

Sorry... and thank for moving to the correct place
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Tirea Aean

no problem, just tryin to keep things clean. These pamrel threads I like to think of as places to comment on the OP with suggestions, questions, and occasional praise or something. ;D Surely it is going to happen where grammar/usage/existence questions come up because of OP, but new threads for those questions should be made in /beginners/ or somewhere else so that things stay on topic everywhere and also so that more people will see the thread because not everyone comes to this subforum ;) 'sall good ma tsmukan.