[WITH EPICFAIL AUDIO!] Trray (translation of Japanese Anime song "Tomorrow')

[Irtaviš Ačankif]

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I sung the song (an insert song from Gundam 00 Season 2) transposed a perfect fifth down and then transposed it up to match the music. Thus the terrible voice (though my real voice is worse!). To fix my extremely out of tune singing, I autotuned it massively. Also, my mic is terrible - I used the builtin mic of my laptop!

Spoiler: Lyrics

Vocals: Tsunematsu Ayumi as Marina Ismail
Lyrics: Kuroda Yosuke & Aa
Composition: Asami Kosei & Kawai Kenji
Arrangement: Nishida Msara
English translation: Atashi
NA'VI TRANSLATION: UNILTÌRANTOKX TE SKXAWNG


Romaji Lyrics         Translation

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Nakusu koto ga   hirou tame nara
Wakareru no wa   deau tame
         If losing things is for picking them back up
         Then parting is for meeting
                  Txo snivaytx nì'aw fpi riveiun mì swaw mi
                  Hivum nì'aw 'eyki'eia leke'aw
         
"Sayounara" no ato ni wa kitto
"Konnichi wa" to deaun da
         After "Goodbye," certainly
         We'll meet with a "Hello"
                  "kìyevameie"maw fìkem lìsyen nìlaw
                  "kaltxì seiyi"fa ultxa si nìsyen
         
Midoriiro shibafu ni nekoronde itai
Doubutsu mo issho ni gorogoroshitai
         I want to lie down on the green grass
         I want to tumble together with the animals
                  rìkeana aysayomì klltxivay new eo tsawke
                  ayioanghu ayskxemì mìn mìnsì mì ayseze

Kyou wa ii koto ga takusan atta kara
Asu mo ii koto ga takusan aru you ni
         If many good things happened today
         Then I wish that many goods things will happen tomorrow, too
                  Txo set lu txana kem asìltsan aleme'em
                  Kop trray livu txana kem asìltsan a lìyeven

O-hi-sama dete   yuuhi kirei de
Hoshi ni negai asu ga kuru
         The Sun comes out, the setting sun is beautiful
         I wish upon the stars, and tomorrow comes
                  Tsasawke fäza'u, tìkusllkä lor lu
                  Sanhì ne serìlpey, trray zera'u
         
Doushite icchau no?
Issho ni kaerou
         Why are you leaving?
         Let's go home together
                  Lumpe nga kerä neto?
                  Oeng set tivätxaw ko
         
Kenka o site   ano ko ga naite
"Gomenasai" ienakute
Kokoro no naka   sakebi naite mo
Kotoba ni shinakya dame da yo
         Getting into a fight, that child cries
         Unable to say, "I'm sorry,"
         Even if you scream and cry inside of your heart
         It's useless if you don't turn them into words
                  Tìwusem serängi, tsa'ewan tsngawvìk mi
                  "Oeru txoa livu" ke tsun pivlltxe
                  Txe'lanä mìfamì, zìmängawng fko hufwa
                  Aylì'uti sto ngivop - ke lu lesar
         
Arigatou   arigatou   boku no o-tomodachi
Aitai na   atarashii   tomodachi no minna
         Thank you, thank you, my friends
         I want to see all of my new friends
                  Irayo si, irayo si, oeyä aysmuktuìri
                  Ultxa new sivi, ayeylanti, alu fratute amip
         
Kimi to te o tsunagu
Sore wa tsubasa ni naru
Minna no te   tsunagu
Oozora mo toberu
         I hold hands with you
         It turns into wings
         I hold hands with everyone
         We can fly through the great sky
                  Ngahu oe set lereiu
                  Aysyokx na aysyalä fya'o slu
                  Set frapo nerew tswivayon
                  Aysawmì kìyä mì rewon
                  
         
Warau   warau   ooki na koe de
Yonde   yonde   daisuki na...
         I laugh, I laugh with a loud voice
         Calling, calling for my favorite...
                  Herahaw, herahaw, mokrifa apxa set
                  Syereiaw, syereiaw, yawnetuti ha
         
Niji-iro kakehashi   watatte "okaeri"
         Crossing the rainbow-colored bridge, I say, "Welcome back"
                  Opinä tseng kereiä, "za'u fìtseng, nìprrte"
         
O-kane ga ne   atte mo tomodachi wa kaenai
Nani mo nakute mo ne   minna ga irun da
         Even if you have money, you can't buy friends
         Even if I don't have anything, everyone is with me
                  Keng ngaru fra'u kifkeymì, ayeylanit ke tsun kivanom
                  Keng oeru kaw'it lu tsyokxmì, fraporu oehu leru fpom
         
Minna kiite   boku-tachi no yume
Minna sitte   boku-tachi o
         Everyone, listen to our dream
         Everyone knows of us
                  Frapo ivomum, ayoeyä unilit
                  Frapo set omum ayoeyä vurit

         
Anata wa   doushiteru?
Boku wa ne   genki da yo
         How are you?
         I'm fine
                  Ngaru set, fpom lu srake?
                  Oeru fpom leru nìtxan
         
Anata wa   doushiteru?
Boku wa ne   genki da yo

         How are you?
         I'm fine
                  Ngaru set, fpom lu srake?
                  Oeru fpom leru nìtxan

Since obviously the audio file is EPIC EPIC FAIL and pretty much unuseable as music, here is the karaoke off-vocal version; if you have a good voice, PLEASE DO RESING THIS SONG!
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/38454768/tomorrow_karaoke.flac

Most importantly, I probably have lots of bad grammar in it due to a long period not writing or speaking Na'vi properly. Any help would be hugely hugely appreciated!

[Irtaviš Ačankif]

If anybody wants it, here is the original Japanese song:
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/38454768/tomorrowFairUseLQ.wav
Purposefully processed to be EXTREMELY LOW QUALITY to comply with Fair Use. Obviously this will not end up pirated across the Internet, because the quality is so low, it hurts your ears

[Irtaviš Ačankif]

Pelun sute ke lolu? Nìftxan fe' fìway lu, kawturu tsaw sunu?

[Blue Elf]

Very interesting work! Thanks to this double transposition I couldn't decide, what language are you singing But it is really Na'vi. However I'm afraid that ejectives and glottal stops are trimmed out by transposition... With standard voice it will sound better, I someone rerecord this song.
I looked at text just very quickly, probably some corrections would be necessary, however current version fits to melody quite well. If I get some time, I'll look at text more deeply, but can't promise.
Thanks for sharing.