Awnga lu 'aw - We are one

[Tìtstewan]

Tse, ma smuk, I listened this song:

Spoiler: Denean - We are one

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NRNmtoGF6b0

..and I translated it. The lyric of the song >>> tsaheylu <<<

I hope you like it.
Reltseotuä srungtsyìp:

San Awnga lu 'aw sìk plltxe nìyey tìtslamne tì'aw awgeyä hu fra'u.
Tìprrte'pe angay? Ftxozä si awngeyä pongu - fte tsivun kivame awngeyä aysätare na hapxì awngeyä. Tsa'u lu ngay.
Slä tsa'u tsranten nìsteng a tenga krr ulte aweng 'ìp aynari awngeyä a tìswok tì'awpoä lu.
Awnga sleykolu letsim sì zey ulte fra'awpo zeya aysu'o a tsun wivìntxu fya'omì awngeyä.
Tuteol rolun faystxelit...tuteol ke rolun.
Slä fo fkeytok.
Oe ätxäle si tsnì aynga ziva'u ne tsenge fte zamivunge meuiaru mesenge tìngayä - tì'aw ulte tì'awpo - ulte fìtìrunkxamlä nga tsivun tivìran mì rey'eng.

AWNGA LU 'AW

Awnga terìran mì atan set / A meoauniaea kelku seri
Teräftxu ayrenu fa awngeyä tìyawn set / A terok fpomit sì rey'engit
Swoka ayingyentsim txepä set / A nerekx nìtxanatan fì'umì
Ayway aymokriyä letaw / A tserìsyì mì hufwe
Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'anìl terakuk / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...Awngeyä aymokril lereyn  / Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw
Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw
Awnga srerew mì atan set / Terìran pxaw sì pxaw
Nìhona way seri fìtìyawn set / Mokri tìngayä srer
Swoka ayingyentsim txepä set / A nerekx Txe'lanmì ngeyä
Ayway aymokriyä letaw / way seri fa 'awa txe'lan ***
Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'anìl terakuk / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...'awsiteng lereyn / Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw
Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw
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Leyn ta ***
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Syena tìrol:
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Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'anìl terakuk / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...Awngeyä aymokril lereyn
Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw...
Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'anìl terakuk / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...'awsiteng lereyn
Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw...
Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'anìl terakuk / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...Awngeyä aymokril lereyn
Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw...
Sran, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw...
Nang, tsaw lu set, awnga lu 'aw...

[Ftiafpi]

Seems like it would be very hard to sing this to the original melody but definitely quite an interesting achievement. I like how you used meoauniaea and awnga lu 'aw is a great line, very nice.

[Tìtstewan]

Irayo ma Ftiafpi!
It was quite hard to translate it, it just missing some useful words...and the text is also "poetic"

[Blue Elf]

Nice song and good job in translation. Well, Na'vi text is too long to fit melody, but I believe it could be shortened wisely, so it could be singable. Will think about it.

Related to text and grammar, IMO some changes in word orders are necessary, mainly in attributive subclauses, which need to be connected to nouns (plus some forgotten case endings).

Artist Note is not easy to translate, as here some missing words. My version would be :
Tìrol alu Awnga lu 'aw plltxe nìyey tìtslamne tì'awä awngeyä hu fra'u.
Lu tìprrte' nìngay fwa ftxozä si awngeyä tsaheylur - fte tsivun kivame awngeyä aysätare na hapxì awngeyä. Tsa'u lu ngay.
Slä tsranten nì'eng fwa tenga krro ayoengal tse'a 'urit tìswokä tì'awpoä awngeyä.
Awngal sleykolu fra'ut letsim sì zey ulte fratuteru a'aw a awngakip lu zeya aysu'o a tsun wivìntxu fya'ofa azey sneyä.
Tuteol rolun faystxelit...tuteol ke rolun.
Slä fo fkeytok.
Oe ätxäle si tsnì aynga ziva'u ne tsenge fte zamivunge meuiat metìngayur alu tì'aw ulte tì'awpo - ulte fìtìrunkxamlä nga tsivun tivìran mì rey'eng.
Note however, that tì'awpo here doesn't work well; it has negative connotation in Na'vi (selfish).

And text (with attempt to overcome some missing/unofficial words words):
Awnga terìran set mì atan / A meoauniaea kelku seri
Teräftxu ayrenut set fa awngeyä tìyawn / A terok fpomit sì rey'engit
Swoka ayingyentsim txepä / A nerekx nìtxanatan mìfa
Ayway aymokriyä a tawta / A tserìsyì mì hufwe
Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'lanur lu 'ekong / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...Awngeyä aymokri lereyn / Nang, pxiset awnga lu 'aw
Nang, pxiset awnga lu 'aw
Awnga srerew mì atan set / Merìn pxaw sì pxaw
Nìhona way seri fìtìyawnteri / Mokri tìngayä srer
Swoka ayingyentsim txepä set / nerekx Txe'lanmì ngeyä
Ayway aymokriyä a tawta / way seri fa 'awa txe'lan ***
Awnga lu 'aw...'awa txe'lanur lu 'ekong / Awnga lu 'aw...Awnga way si
Awnga lu 'aw...'awsiteng lereyn / Nang, pxiset awnga lu 'aw
Nang, pxiset awnga lu 'aw

Anyway, good job. Now we need to make it singable, definitely.

[Tìtstewan]

Irayo nìtxan ma Blue Elf!
Yeah, making this text singable... it's not easy...