Ayronsrel

Started by Tswusayona Tsamsiyu, March 06, 2011, 02:37:27 PM

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Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

Here's a song I wrote today at class.
I hope you enjoy.

Ayronsrel
Na ikran oe new tswivayon
Na toruk tsive'a ta taw
Rikx nìwin mì ya
Na kifkeyä eyktan

Na palulukan tivaron mì na'rìng
Txur to soaia nantangä
Na 'angtsìk txopu seykivi
Na kifkeyä eyktan

Na yerik tivul na hufwe
Na talioang kxll sivi ne kxutu
Na yayo livu lor
Na kifkeyä eyktan

Sunu oer tìronsrelngusop
Tìronsrelngusop a'o'
Slä sunu oer frato
Fwa oe lu 'eveng leNa'vi
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Plumps

Txantsan nìngay ulte txanatan fìtxan!

I was thinking of the "like a ..." sentences for a while but I think it will be understood as long as you keep in mind that all the subordinate clauses you begin must carry the ‹iv› infix since all the verbs refer back to your first oe new.

I don't quite understand the second line of the second stanza. Where's the comparison of to soaia

Check again the infix position for ronsrelngop, it's ronsrelng‹1›‹2›p which makes the gerund tìronsrelngusop

If you mean 'fun/exciting imagining' in the third to last line, then there's an attributive -a- missing: ... tìronsrelngusop a'o'

Is there a melody for it? :) Would love to hear it!

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

#2
irayo ma tsmuk. I will correct it.

QuoteI don't quite understand the second line of the second stanza. Where's the comparison of to soaia
I ment the palulukan is stronger than a soaia nantangä. since I already mentioned the palulukan I think it's obvious that I'm talking about it in the second sentence as well, so I don't I have to mention it again.

QuoteCheck again the infix position for ronsrelngop, it's ronsrelng‹1›‹2›p which makes the gerund tìronsrelngusop
that's weird. the first infix position should be before the second to last vowel. is ronsrelngop irregular or something?

QuoteIf you mean 'fun/exciting imagining' in the third to last line, then there's an attributive -a- missing: ... tìronsrelngusop a'o'
irayo. for some reason I remembered wrongly that 'o' is an intransitive verb.

and I didn't think of a melody. I'm not the best with music and I can't sing.
anyway, irayo ma 'eylan oey.
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

eejmensenikbenhet

#3
Quote from: Tswusayona Tsamsiyu on March 07, 2011, 06:50:57 AM
QuoteCheck again the infix position for ronsrelngop, it's ronsrelng‹1›‹2›op which makes the gerund tìronsrelngusop
that's weird. the first infix position should be before the second to last vowel. is ronsrelngop irregular or something?
ronsrelngop is a combination:
ronsrelngop = ronsrel + ngop
And if you have such an combination, all the infixes go in the (main) verb.

Kamean

Txantsan! Sunu oeru fìtìrol nìtxan. :) :D
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

irayo ma Kamean ulte tìtìngìri tìyawrä irayo
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

Alyara Arati

Tìrol asìltsan!  Furia tsun nga pamrel sivi numtsengmì lu txantsan nìftxan! 8)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Tswusayona Tsamsiyu

irayo. the lesson was a bit boring so I let myself do something else, and inspiration comes in weird moments. :)
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu