Fralo a 'Ampi Moe

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Txonä Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì

Kaltxì ma frapo, lahea tìrolit ralpoleng oel :) Lu tìrol alu Fralo a 'Ampi Moe ta Kaskata. Fìtìrolit oeyä muntxatefpi ralpoleng oel ulte new poeru rivol slä ayhapxìomì aylì'u pamtseohu ke kä ulte tsari kin oel srungit. Tsayhapxì layu tun. Nìfrakrr, txo kxeyeyit tse'a ngal, rutxe oeru tivìng tìyawrit. Aylì'ul le'Ìnglìsì fìtsenget tok kop sutefpi a fìtìrol foru ke smon.

Ngeyä mokriti mi stawm oel krr a oesìm nga hahaw
Ngeyä tsyokxit mi 'efu oel ayunilmì oeyä
Oe lu meyp a fì'uri oeru txoa livu
Oeri ngaluke lu ngäzìk fte emrivey

Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe fìtì'efu lu oeru
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe tsun tsivayon
Srake nga ke tsun 'ivefu 'ekongit awin oeyä txe'lanä
New futa fì'u vivar
Ngati kin oel oelok
Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe 'efu oel tìyawnit
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe kä ne taw
Srake 'ekongit oeyä txe'lanä ke tsun nga 'ivefu
Ke tsun oe ngati livonu
New ngati tìreymì oeyä

Ngeyä mepun lu oeyä zongtseng, ngeyä txe'lan lu oeyä taw
Sleyku fol ukxo payit a tsngawvìk oe
Hrrit asìltsan sì kawng emroley moel nìwotx
Oeti ngal kxllkeykem krr a oe zup

Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe fìtì'efu lu oeru
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe tsun tsivayon
Srake nga ke tsun nga 'ivefu ekongit awin oeyä txe'lanä
New futa fì'u vivar
Ngati kin oel oelok
Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe 'efu oel tìyawnit
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe kä ne taw
Srake 'ekongit oeyä txe'lanä ke tsun nga 'ivefu
Ke tsun oe ngati livonu
New ngati tìreymì oeyä

Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe 'efu oel tìyawnit
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe kä ne taw
Srake 'ekongit oeyä txe'lanä ke tsun nga 'ivefu
Ke tsun oe ngati livonu
New ngati tìreymì oeyä



-Txonä Rolyu




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Tirea Aean

Interesting. You know, I was looking into translating this as well. Maybe I should do that sometime soon and post my take and we can compare and discuss. ;)

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Txonä Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì

Quote from: Tirea Aean on October 13, 2011, 08:05:36 AM
Interesting. You know, I was looking into translating this as well. Maybe I should do that sometime soon and post my take and we can compare and discuss. ;)

I'd love to! :)

-Txonä Rolyu




AvatarMeet was fantastic. Thanks to all who attended :D

Avatar Nation Karyu :D

Na'vi Kintrrä #70° :D

Keyeyluke ke tsun livu kea tìnusume

Oeri Uniltìrantokxìl txe'lanit nì'aw takeiuk nì'ul txa' fralo

Fpìl na Na'vi. Plltxe na Na'vi. Tìran na Na'vi. Kame na Na'vi

Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Blue Elf

#5
Well, good job! I don't know this song too well, so I'll don't help you much, but here are some typos and proposals:

Quote from: Txonä Te Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì on October 13, 2011, 01:54:39 AM
Ngeyä mokriti mi stawm oel krr a oesìm nga hahaw sìm doesn't exist, maybe you mean sim, what is verb, not adposition. I think lok is best choice, maybe also asim (not too sure)
Ngeyä mokriti mi stawm oel krr a oe hahaw asim/lok nga
Ngeyä tsyokxit mi 'efu oel ayunilmì oeyä
Oe lu meyp a fì'uri oeru txoa livu
Oeri ngaluke lu ngäzìk fte emrivey

Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe fìtì'efu lu oeru
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe tsun tswivayon
Srake ngal ke tsun 'ivefu 'ekongit awin oeyä txe'lanä tsun 'ivefu is too literal, IMHO 'efu is ok and sufficient
New futa fì'u vivar
Ngati kin oel oelok
Taluna fralo a 'ampi moe 'efu oel tìyawnit
Ulte fralo a pom moe, oe kä ne taw
Srake 'ekongit oeyä txe'lanä ke tsun ngal ke 'ivefu as above
Ke tsun oe ngati livonu
New ngati tìreymì oeyä

Ngeyä mepun lu oeyä zongtseng, ngeyä txe'lan lu oeyä taw
Sleyku fol ukxo payit a tsngawvìk oe
Hrrit asìltsan sì kawng emroley moel nìwotx
Oeti ngal kllkxeykem krr a oe zup

....
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Txonä Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì

Quote from: Blue Elf on October 14, 2011, 03:58:10 PM
Well, good job! I don't know this song too well, so I'll don't help you much, but here are some typos and proposals:

Ngeyä mokriti mi stawm oel krr a oesìm nga hahaw sìm doesn't exist, maybe you mean sim, what is verb, not adposition. I think lok is best choice, maybe also asim (not too sure)
Ngeyä mokriti mi stawm oel krr a oe hahaw asim/lok nga

Hmm yeah Idk what I was thinking here lol.....I meant to say "oelok"

Quote from: Blue Elf on October 14, 2011, 03:58:10 PM
Taluna fralo krr a 'ampi moe fìtì'efu lu oeru I think krr is needed

Having "krr" with "fralo" would be redundant because "fralo" already means 'every time'

Quote from: Blue Elf on October 14, 2011, 03:58:10 PM
Ulte fralo krr a pom moe, oe tsun tswivayon
Srake ngal ke tsun 'ivefu 'ekongit awin oeyä txe'lanä tsun 'ivefu is too literal, IMHO 'efu is ok and sufficient

Hmm....ok, I see what you did there, I kinda like it. It makes that line a tinge more singable with the melody too.

Quote from: Blue Elf on October 14, 2011, 03:58:10 PM
Oeti ngal kllkxeykem krr a oe zup

'Ä'! Irayo :)

Srungìri seiyi irayo ma Blue Elf

-Txonä Rolyu








AvatarMeet was fantastic. Thanks to all who attended :D

Avatar Nation Karyu :D

Na'vi Kintrrä #70° :D

Keyeyluke ke tsun livu kea tìnusume

Oeri Uniltìrantokxìl txe'lanit nì'aw takeiuk nì'ul txa' fralo

Fpìl na Na'vi. Plltxe na Na'vi. Tìran na Na'vi. Kame na Na'vi

Blue Elf

Quote from: Txonä Te Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì on October 14, 2011, 07:51:05 PM

Quote from: Blue Elf on October 14, 2011, 03:58:10 PM
Taluna fralo krr a 'ampi moe fìtì'efu lu oeru I think krr is needed

Having "krr" with "fralo" would be redundant because "fralo" already means 'every time'
ììì, well, taking that back. Seems that night is not good time for thinking :)
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Srungìri seiyi irayo ma Blue Elf

-Txonä Rolyu
Kea tìkin, sìlpey oe tsnì awnga tsayun tivìng mikyun fìtìrolur krr a nga hasey si pumur
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)