Home on the Range for Karyu Pawl

Ftiafpi · July 24, 2011, 07:01:28 PM

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on August 26, 2012, 04:27:41 AM
Here is the final recording:
Kelku mì Tayo (Home on the Range nìNa'vi)
Sheet music can be found here.

A huge IRAYO for our tsmukan eejmensenikbenhet who created the final sung version of Kelku mì Tayo.

Kelku mì Tayo
Home on the Range

Last Updated: 12/22/2011

Tìng oeru kelkut.
Tseng a eyktan oe lu.
Tseng a ayyerik tivul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'uti akawng.
Ulte taw livu ean fratrr.

Chorus
Kelku mì tayo.
Tseng a ayyerik tivul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'uti akawng.
Ulte taw livu ean fratrr.

Txon a krr oe heyn.
Tengkrr txanatan lu taw.
Ta sanhì sì Eywayä atan.
Oe kllkxem ulte
pawm fwa pxìm oe pawm
Srake fì'ul tok tsengeti kop?

Chorus

Syulang lu yawne
mì awngey fìtsenge
Oer lu yawne nantangä nguway
tsmuke sì tsmukan, sì lora ayikran
a tswayon kxamlä taw nìwin

Chorus

[Slowly]Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

COMPLETED Dec 20th, 2011

Original Song:
Home on the range-CowBoy Songs

Oh, give me a home where the Buffalo roam
Where the Deer and the Antelope play;
Where seldom is heard a discouraging word,
And the sky is not cloudy all day.

Chorus
Home, home on the range,
Where the Deer an the Antelope play,
Where seldom is heard a discouraging word,
And the sky is not clouded all day.

How often at night, when the heavens are bright,
With the light of the glittering stars
Have I stood here amazed, and asked as I gazed,
Does their glory exceed that of ours.

Chorus

I love the wild flowers in this bright land of ours,
I love the wild curlew's shrill scream;
The bluffs and white rocks, and antelope flocks
That graze on the mountains so green.

Chorus

The air is so pure and the breezes so fine,
The zephyrs so balmy and light,
That I would not exchange my home here to range
Forever in azures so bright.

Chorus

Original Message: Per the Seattle panel, Karyu Pawl suggested that "Home on the Range" would sound well if translated into and sung in Na'vi. Anyone wish to join me in creating such a song for him?

Ftxavanga Txe′lan · July 24, 2011, 07:16:24 PM

I'd like to help, but I don't think I'd be good enough in Na'vi for writing/translating the actual lyrics of the song.

It might end up full of mistakes if I do.

Ftiafpi · July 24, 2011, 08:29:42 PM

Well, I don't mind doing the translation, really what I need is someone who can sing it.

'Oma Tirea · July 25, 2011, 12:16:38 AM

What are the lyrics?... or are they (still) being developed?

Ftxavanga Txe′lan · July 25, 2011, 06:57:48 AM

Wou hihi, okay.

Well, my voice isn't bad, but I can't sing high notes and the technology available for me to record my voice isn't very good.

I don't have any microphone, I can just sing in front of my computer.

Ftiafpi · July 25, 2011, 09:20:42 AM

Quote from: 'Oma Tirea on July 25, 2011, 12:16:38 AM
What are the lyrics?... or are they (still) being developed?

Still need to be developed.

hemmond · August 17, 2011, 06:45:57 AM

Well... I might be able to sing, but I don't know this song at all, so I'd be great if you put here Youtube Video with the original song.

Ftiafpi · August 17, 2011, 09:42:33 AM

Sure thing. I've been struggling to find the free time to work on the lyrics but I hope to have a bit of it done this afternoon.

eejmensenikbenhet · August 25, 2011, 06:26:37 AM

During my holiday in Turkey, sitting in the lobby waiting for my parents I came up with some lyrics that closely resemble the original and they're singable (I tried of course

).

Tivìng oer kelku.
Tseng a eyktan oe lu.
Tseng a ayyerìk tul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'ut akawng.
Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

Kelku mì tayo.
Tseng a ayyerìk tul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'ut akawng.
Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

I hope it is a use to your translation.

Tirea Aean · August 25, 2011, 07:53:21 AM

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on August 25, 2011, 06:26:37 AM
During my holiday in Turkey, sitting in the lobby waiting for my parents I came up with some lyrics that closely resemble the original and they're singable (I tried of course ).

Tivìng oer kelku.
Tseng a eyktan oe lu.
Tseng a ayyerìk tul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'ut akawng.
Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

Kelku mì tayot.
Tseng a ayyerìk tul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'ut akawng.
Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

I hope it is a use to your translation.

this is good.

Just wondering why txayo has a t there and the first "kelku" doesn't

.

eejmensenikbenhet · August 25, 2011, 09:14:49 AM

Quote from: Tirea Aean on August 25, 2011, 07:53:21 AM
Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on August 25, 2011, 06:26:37 AM
During my holiday in Turkey, sitting in the lobby waiting for my parents I came up with some lyrics that closely resemble the original and they're singable (I tried of course ).

Tivìng oer kelku.
Tseng a eyktan oe lu.
Tseng a ayyerìk tul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'ut akawng.
Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

Kelku mì tayot.
Tseng a ayyerìk tul nìwin.
Kawkrr ngal ke stawm aylì'ut akawng.
Ulte taw layu ean fratrr.

I hope it is a use to your translation.

this is good. Just wondering why txayo has a t there and the first "kelku" doesn't .

Well that's a typo

(The -t on txayo... I wasn't really sure about the -t on kelku.)

Ftiafpi · August 25, 2011, 12:01:59 PM

An excellent start! I've still been tied up trying to revise the "Whole new world" song translation I made ages ago but that should be finished today and I can return to this. I'll definitely use your beginning and expand on it. Irayo!

eejmensenikbenhet · August 25, 2011, 01:44:48 PM

Ooh, I love the Mipa Kifkey translation! Needs some shaving here and therefore I'm honoured to be able to help you a little with this song while you work on Mipa Kifkey.

Ftiafpi · August 25, 2011, 02:15:06 PM

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on August 25, 2011, 01:44:48 PM
Ooh, I love the Mipa Kifkey translation! Needs some shaving here and therefore I'm honoured to be able to help you a little with this song while you work on Mipa Kifkey.

Finished my changes to Mipa Kifkey, should be much more up to date now.

Kamean · August 25, 2011, 02:45:32 PM

Seysonìltsan ma eejmensenikbenhet.

eejmensenikbenhet · August 25, 2011, 03:33:31 PM

Quote from: Ftiafpi on August 25, 2011, 02:15:06 PM
Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on August 25, 2011, 01:44:48 PM
Ooh, I love the Mipa Kifkey translation! Needs some shaving here and therefore I'm honoured to be able to help you a little with this song while you work on Mipa Kifkey.

Finished my changes to Mipa Kifkey, should be much more up to date now.

Yeey

Quote from: Kamean on August 25, 2011, 02:45:32 PM
Seysonìltsan ma eejmensenikbenhet.

Irayo ma Kamean!

Ftiafpi · August 26, 2011, 12:14:25 PM

Modified the original post to reflect the most current version.

eejmensenikbenhet · August 26, 2011, 01:28:53 PM

Just a little question: why did you undo the lenition of txayo by mì?

Ftiafpi · August 26, 2011, 02:20:40 PM

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on August 26, 2011, 01:28:53 PM
Just a little question: why did you undo the lenition of txayo by mì?

Because I'm a skxawng.

(For some reason I was thinking you were making it plural "fields" and failed to notice the mì+)

eejmensenikbenhet · August 26, 2011, 03:53:41 PM

Haha doesn't matter, I saw it and I thought

huh?
I'm more of a skxawng than you, believe me expecially when it's about lì'fya leNa'vi.