Kilvan (River - Bishop Briggs)

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Alyara Arati

Okay, this is a moderately sloppy translation for me.  Yes, it fits the syllable count, but I left pronouns "understood" all over the place, and coined some words, most of which were done legally, I think.  Anyway, I hope you enjoy the song!  Let me know if I forgot anything...   :)



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~ Leonardo da Vinci

Toliman

Quote from: Alyara Arati on November 04, 2019, 11:19:56 PM
Okay, this is a moderately sloppy translation for me.  Yes, it fits the syllable count, but I left pronouns "understood" all over the place, and coined some words, most of which were done legally, I think.  Anyway, I hope you enjoy the song!  Let me know if I forgot anything...   :)

Yeah, I understand what you mean however I would say that it's good translation. Sunu oeru!
And song is good, I enjoyed it :)

Alyara Arati

Irayo ma Toliman!  Tstunwi lu nga!  I need to check out your work, and will soon; I promise! :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Toliman

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Quote from: Alyara Arati on November 05, 2019, 03:49:27 PM
Irayo ma Toliman!  Tstunwi lu nga!  I need to check out your work, and will soon; I promise! :)
Kea tìkin :)
I hope that you will can complete your next work here again soon.