Lyrics for Inspirata's Songs

Kamean · May 09, 2011, 01:42:22 PM

Txantsana tìrol ma Aylara. Suneiu oer nìtxan nang.

Alyara Arati · May 10, 2011, 07:33:34 PM

Nawmutral (I can write more if you like what I'm doing here)

'ong, nawma utral
utral atsawl
var, ewll atxur
txur stum frakrr
kllkxem, utral anawm
nawm na ayram
rey, kxayl sì apxa
apxa tawna
nawmutral, lu yey sì fkew
fkew mi tsawl slu

Blue Elf · May 11, 2011, 12:45:38 AM

Beautiful. I'm thinking if I could write some poetry too (not for song), something simple, without rhymes..... hmmm, maybe a little later....

Alyara Arati · May 11, 2011, 01:00:36 AM

Quote from: Blue Elf on May 11, 2011, 12:45:38 AM
Beautiful. I'm thinking if I could write some poetry too (not for song), something simple, without rhymes..... hmmm, maybe a little later....

You never know until you try...

Sireayä mokri · May 11, 2011, 09:05:17 AM

Txantsan, nìpxi san kllkxem, utral anawm nawm na ayram sìk

Kamean · May 11, 2011, 09:57:17 AM

Txantsan.

'Oma Tirea · May 12, 2011, 01:04:39 AM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 10, 2011, 07:33:34 PM
Nawmutral (I can write more if you like what I'm doing here)

'ong, nawma utral
utral atsawl
var, ewll atxur
txur stum frakrr
kllkxem, utral anawm
nawm na ayram
rey, kxayl sì apxa
apxa tawna
nawmutral, lu yey sì fkew
fkew mi tsawl slu

Txantsan

Here's a similar song you can try: Uvan (NB even though the rest of the song is in Na'vi I have plans to throw in "GAME" into the song where there's silence xD)

Alyara Arati · May 12, 2011, 01:33:43 AM

Just so you know, all the lyrics that I post here have been approved by my cat.

T.S. At 2:09 I might put "GAME", but without "did you just lose?"; save that for 4:01 and 5:22.

'Oma Tirea · May 12, 2011, 03:16:38 AM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 12, 2011, 01:33:43 AM
Just so you know, all the lyrics that I post here have been approved by my cat.

T.S. At 2:09 I might put "GAME", but without "did you just lose?"; save that for 4:01 and 5:22.

I wasn't planning on "did you just lose" in the lyrics.

Alyara Arati · May 12, 2011, 06:41:46 AM

Okay, I think that's good, although if you wanted to you could add it at 5:22 without breaking the flow.

Did you want another couple or 4 verses of Nawmutral, while I'm at it?

Because I wrote another 8 lines, and although I don't feel that they're as strong as the first set, you could divide the middle stretch into 2 repeats instead of 4.

(more) Nawmutral

txe'-lan na'rìngä
na'rìng virä
hapxì, Eywayä lu
lu mì sìfnu
mip, koaksì zo
zo fa fya'o
txantslusam, tì'i'avay
vay tsim nìngay

Alyara Arati · May 13, 2011, 08:20:07 PM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on April 28, 2011, 11:46:32 PM
Atanhì (revision - better, although it still doesn't rhyme... $:-\$ )

txonä sanhì
mì sìvawmä
txayo apxa
lam, pxel aylrrtok oer
(ngahu)

pamtseo si
fo ayrolur
atxanatan
na, nìwotx kìfkey srew
(ngahu)

nawma utral
tsawl sleru hu
swoka renu
syayä plltxe
Na'viru na ~~a lu~~
ay-atokirina'
(ngahu)

fo txantslusam
lu luke krr
tengfya hangham
fo, pxel eveng tawä
(ngahu)

tute alu
mawey yesì
oe ke lu
oel, ayatanvit sutx
(ngahu)

ulte frakrr
zene oe
nì'aw nivong
fey, tìfyawusìntxut
(ngahu)

I'm going to have to ask for help again with Uvan. I feel I'm writing to the wrong theme... All I have is:

tul. srak nga terul?
fìtìrey lu
skxom ngeyä nì'awtu

'Oma Tirea · May 14, 2011, 01:31:25 AM

Ningay ke omum... ngaytxoa

Alyara Arati · May 14, 2011, 02:11:48 AM

Quote from: Inspirata on May 14, 2011, 01:31:25 AM
Ningay ke omum... ngaytxoa

Okay... how fast can you sing a tongue twister? Could you fit this between 2:47 and 2:51?

tul. nìswey lu txo nga tivul swey a nga tsun.
talun skxom ngey fìtìrey lu nì'awtu.

If yes, then I'll work on what comes before and after the hard part...

Alyara Arati · May 14, 2011, 11:41:02 PM

Uvan2

2:40 'o'. lu 'o' nìtxan uvan seri
txo nivew flivä zene fmivi

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 14, 2011, 02:11:48 AM
2:47 tul. nìswey lu txo nga tivul swey a nga tsun.
talun skxom ngey fìtìrey lu nì'awtu. 2:51

ko frapo ke tsun tìftang sivi
fko täp-a-tep
UVAN! 2:57

'Oma Tirea · May 16, 2011, 01:04:06 AM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 14, 2011, 11:41:02 PM
Uvan2

2:40 'o'. lu 'o' nìtxan uvan seri
txo nivew flivä zene fmivi

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 14, 2011, 02:11:48 AM
2:47 tul. nìswey lu txo nga tivul swey a nga tsun.
talun skxom ngey fìtìrey lu nì'awtu. 2:51

ko frapo ke tsun tìftang sivi
fko täp-a-tep
UVAN! 2:57

* Inspirata SUNU

Txantsana tìkangkem, ma Alyara

Alyara Arati · May 16, 2011, 08:18:47 PM

Ram aLusìng

ayram alusìngmì
lu yapay kllteru
atan zup na herwì
skxeri taw teya lu

sop Iknimayane
ayram alusìngmì
tswayon nga na hufwe
alu kxayl kalinsì

na'rìngä ayhapxì
rikx na fìwopx sa'u
ayram alusìngmì
tìlor fratsenge lu

tìronsrelit ngey spaw
ayunilit stä'nì
hufwa nga ke hahaw
ayram alusìngmì

Blue Elf · May 17, 2011, 12:38:42 AM

Amazing poetry, ma Alyara! Pleasant reading at the beginning of the new day...

Alyara Arati · May 17, 2011, 12:42:34 AM

Quote from: Blue Elf on May 17, 2011, 12:38:42 AM
Amazing poetry, ma Alyara! Pleasant reading at the beginning of the new day...

Thank you so much! Have a lovely morning ma 'eylan!

Sireayä mokri · May 17, 2011, 08:50:18 AM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 16, 2011, 08:18:47 PM
skxeri taw teya lu

Txantsan nìngay, mllteie oe hu Blue Elf

Kamean · May 17, 2011, 10:01:50 AM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 16, 2011, 08:18:47 PM
Ram aLusìng

ayram alusìngmì
lu yapay kllteru
atan zup na herwì
taw teya skxeyä lu

sop Iknimayane
ayram alusìngmì
tswayon nga na hufwe
alu kxayl kalinsì

na'rìngä ayhapxì
rikx na fìwopx sa'u
ayram alusìngmì
tìlor fratsenge lu

tìronsrelit ngey spaw
ayunilit stä'nì
hufwa nga ke hahaw
ayram alusìngmì

Txantsan nìtxan nang! Oer ke lu aylì'u.