Lyrics for Inspirata's Songs

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Alyara Arati

#60
May 17, 2011, 11:28:29 AM
Ma meylan, mengeyä aylì'u atstunwi lu na sanga atan tsawkeyä oeru.  Irayo fìtxan! :D 8) :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

'Oma Tirea

#61
May 18, 2011, 01:23:28 AM
Quote from: Kamean on May 17, 2011, 10:01:50 AM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 16, 2011, 08:18:47 PM
Ram aLusìng

ayram alusìngmì
lu yapay kllteru
atan zup na herwì
taw teya skxeyä lu

sop Iknimayane
ayram alusìngmì
tswayon nga na hufwe
alu kxayl kalinsì

na'rìngä ayhapxì
rikx na fìwopx sa'u
ayram alusìngmì
tìlor fratsenge lu

tìronsrelit ngey spaw
ayunilit stä'nì
hufwa nga ke hahaw
ayram alusìngmì
Thanysan nìtxan nang! Oer ke lu aylì'u. :) :D :)

Mllteie :D

Ma Kamean, tsolun nga *type* trram? ::) :P

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Kamean

#62
May 18, 2011, 10:46:41 AM
Quote from: Inspirata on May 18, 2011, 01:23:28 AM
Ma Kamean, tsolun nga *typo* trram? ::) :P
Srane, slä nga nìteng. ;)
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Sireayä mokri

#63
May 18, 2011, 11:09:44 AM
Quote from: Kamean on May 18, 2011, 10:46:41 AM
Quote from: Inspirata on May 18, 2011, 01:23:28 AM
Ma Kamean, tsolun nga *typo* trram? ::) :P
Srane, slä nga nìteng. ;)

"Type" lu kemlì'u ;)
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Kamean

#64
May 18, 2011, 01:40:40 PM
Irayo. Ke tslolam oe fì'u nìyawr. :-[
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Alyara Arati

#65
May 20, 2011, 12:52:17 PM Last Edit: May 20, 2011, 03:21:18 PM by Alyara Arati
Kllrikx

2:48
poe

    oe ke tsun
    wivìntxu
    oey keyit
    kifkeyru
chant:

    ulte rikx kllte set ngian
    ulte rikx kllte set ngian
poan

    txopu si
    fwa ke tsun
    kivame
    oet kawtu
chant:

    ulte rikx kllte set ngian
    ulte rikx kllte set ngian
mefo

    'awsiteng
    oeng ke lu
    fu nìwotx
    nì'awtu
chant:

    ulte rikx kllte set ngian
    ulte rikx kllte set ngian
poe

    oe ke tsun
poan

    txopu si
mefo

    ngian oeng
    set fmasyi
(no chant)
3:36
poe

    oe seykxel
    mi ke lu
    slä lu oe
    pamreltu
poan

    slä lu oey
    pamtseo
    fya'o fa
    tse'a fko
mefo

    rikx nìk'ong
    fìkllte
    tsranten mi
    hem oengey
poe

    pamrel sì
poan

    pamtseo
mefo

    'awsiteng
    lu, frawzo
4:00
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~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

#66
May 20, 2011, 03:13:39 PM
As usual, very good :) But some parts are very similar to "Ulte kllte rikx" from Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw thread - it was training for this song? ;)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Alyara Arati

#67
May 20, 2011, 03:20:04 PM
Quote from: Blue Elf on May 20, 2011, 03:13:39 PM
As usual, very good :) But some parts are very similar to "Ulte kllte rikx" from Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw thread - it was training for this song? ;)

Yes, I liked it better as "Ulte Kllte Rikx", so I posted that.  However, it didn't fit well with Inspirata's music, so I remade the song.  I like this version, too, though.  So, I must thank you again! :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

#68
May 20, 2011, 04:24:40 PM
Ma Aylara, ngeyä sìrol leiu atxantsan nìwotx. :D
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Alyara Arati

#69
May 20, 2011, 04:39:10 PM
Quote from: Kamean on May 20, 2011, 04:24:40 PM
Ma Aylara, ngeyä sìrol leiu atxantsan nìwotx. :D

Ulte ngeyä txe'lan leiu tstunwi nìtxan. :) :D :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

#70
May 20, 2011, 04:53:28 PM
Ngeyä nìteng. :) :D :-*
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.

Alyara Arati

#71
May 20, 2011, 09:30:21 PM Last Edit: May 22, 2011, 01:02:22 PM by Alyara Arati
Okay, here's a little more Uvan2:

2:10-2:40
tul.  srak nga terul?
omatsum fìtsengur smon slä
slä kä nga pesengne nga kä?
uvan lu

ha fra'u, lu mì eltu
lu ngay fu ron-srel?
uvan lu (gliss.)

(I would change voices here as it goes straight into very different music at 2:40 where my first set of lyrics begins.
I'm still working on something later in the song...)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Kamean

#72
May 21, 2011, 10:21:00 AM
Sunu :)
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Blue Elf

#73
May 21, 2011, 03:41:34 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 20, 2011, 09:30:21 PM
Okay, here's a little more Uvan2:

2:10-2:40
tul.  srak nga terul?
omatsum fìtsengit
slä kä nga peseng?
uvan lu

If you didn't ommit case ending intentionaly, it should be there
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Alyara Arati

#74
May 21, 2011, 03:57:14 PM
Quote from: Blue Elf on May 21, 2011, 03:41:34 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 20, 2011, 09:30:21 PM
Okay, here's a little more Uvan2:

2:10-2:40
tul.  srak nga terul?
omatsum fìtsengit
slä kä nga peseng?
uvan lu

If you didn't ommit case ending intentionaly, it should be there

I did, but I probably shouldn't have.  Trying to rhyme is making me get lazy about my grammar.  I'll rethink that and see if I can be grammatical and lyrical and the same time.  Thanks!
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

#75
May 21, 2011, 04:22:41 PM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 21, 2011, 03:57:14 PM
I did, but I probably shouldn't have.  Trying to rhyme is making me get lazy about my grammar.  I'll rethink that and see if I can be grammatical and lyrical and the same time.  Thanks!
That's hard, I know :) Are you using rhyming dictionary? Tirea Aean keeps it current at http://tirea.dyndns.info/NaviRhymeDictionary.html. It could be useful, although it contain only words in base form, without casing (impossible to have  everything  :))
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)

Sireayä mokri

#76
May 22, 2011, 10:10:59 AM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 21, 2011, 03:57:14 PM
Trying to rhyme is making me get lazy about my grammar.  I'll rethink that and see if I can be grammatical and lyrical and the same time.

Then, please also note pesengne nga kerä :)
When the mirror speaks, the reflection lies.

Alyara Arati

#77
May 22, 2011, 01:04:41 PM Last Edit: May 26, 2011, 05:50:45 PM by Alyara Arati
Irayo ma mesmuk!  Spaw oel futa nì'i'a fì'u lu eyawr. :-[


Okay, last bit of Uvan2:

(not terribly inspired, but at that point I think you only need a few words anyway)

4:01
za'-u ulte uvan si oeru
za'u uvan si oeru nga nì'ul
u-van si oer  4:09
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

#78
May 26, 2011, 05:56:47 PM
@ 'Oma Tirea:  I have made an effort with all of my lyrics to make the stress of the words match the rhythm and flow of the music.

Also, working on Txura Hufwe now.  Did you want words for Wewtseng, or would you prefer to leave that entirely instrumental?
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

'Oma Tirea

#79
May 29, 2011, 03:24:02 AM
Quote from: Alyara Arati on May 26, 2011, 05:56:47 PM
Did you want words for Wewtseng, or would you prefer to leave that entirely instrumental?

Glad you asked :) As I reflect back on that song, I imagine it better as something purely instrumental.

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