Meuia Fpomur - Ode to Happiness

[eejmensenikbenhet]

Uhm... Sorry to say it but no...
When you correct the mistake in line 2 you'll see that your syllables aren't right: ayoengAru
You got to sing Eyheywa in the 6th line.
The 7th line has too much syllables to sing with the melody I know but has the same amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

In my version you have to say hì'ia faster than the melody
And the same thing counts for Ro Ayvitrayä Ramunong
The 7th line has precicely enough syllables to sing with the melody I know but has a smaller amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

Well, both versions have 2 parts that don't quite fit and one part that is doubdtfull. You can't say your one is better singable.
Just needed to clarify this.

[Irtaviš Ačankif]

Uhm... Sorry to say it but no...
When you correct the mistake in line 2 you'll see that your syllables aren't right: ayoengAru
You got to sing Eyheywa in the 6th line.
The 7th line has too much syllables to sing with the melody I know but has the same amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

In my version you have to say hì'ia faster than the melody
And the same thing counts for Ro Ayvitrayä Ramunong
The 7th line has precicely enough syllables to sing with the melody I know but has a smaller amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

Well, both versions have 2 parts that don't quite fit and one part that is doubdtfull. You can't say your one is better singable.
Just needed to clarify this.

'aw-steng-yem mì ma Ey-wa!

the syllables are right!

[Tirea Aean]

Uhm... Sorry to say it but no...
When you correct the mistake in line 2 you'll see that your syllables aren't right: ayoengAru
You got to sing Eyheywa in the 6th line.
The 7th line has too much syllables to sing with the melody I know but has the same amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

In my version you have to say hì'ia faster than the melody
And the same thing counts for Ro Ayvitrayä Ramunong
The 7th line has precicely enough syllables to sing with the melody I know but has a smaller amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

Well, both versions have 2 parts that don't quite fit and one part that is doubdtfull. You can't say your one is better singable.
Just needed to clarify this.

'aw-steng-yem mì ma Ey-wa!

the syllables are right!

but the grammar is not. you cant use ma mì there that way (one of those two, I sense idiom direct translation "X joins in.".

Oeyä tìrol to ngeyä tìrol lu nìftue rolyä.

it doesnt make sense to put noun case suffixes on a verb.

[eejmensenikbenhet]

Uhm... Sorry to say it but no...
When you correct the mistake in line 2 you'll see that your syllables aren't right: ayoengAru
You got to sing Eyheywa in the 6th line.
The 7th line has too much syllables to sing with the melody I know but has the same amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

In my version you have to say hì'ia faster than the melody
And the same thing counts for Ro Ayvitrayä Ramunong
The 7th line has precicely enough syllables to sing with the melody I know but has a smaller amount of syllables as the German version so that's quite all right.

Well, both versions have 2 parts that don't quite fit and one part that is doubdtfull. You can't say your one is better singable.
Just needed to clarify this.

'aw-steng-yem mì ma Ey-wa!

the syllables are right!

Forgot to say that here as well you need to correct the mistake already indicated by Tirea Aean above...