On the palm - Tsyokxmì

[Blue Elf]

Recently I found this song by Mandrage (Czech music band), which is played quite often on the radio stations these days in my country. I like it, it is simple and it wasn't too hard to translate it into Na'vi, so now you can see the result.
Mandrage - Na dlani (oficiální lyric video)
Original Czech text you can found on this page (together with another video, which totally doesn't correspond with song)

Spoiler: Rough English translation

On the palm

Stars were falling down, falling down
They sent short signals
Save our spirits, our lives
Stars were falling over us
Your radars bring them to bear
so no fears and do not panic

Only one of stars
found one of paths
to be able to glide down
and fall down to your eyelids

(yeah) you give them names and surnames
(yeah) you hold them like a heart in the palm
(yeah) you save them to not injure themselves
(yeah) you hold them like a heart in the palm

Stars were falling down, falling down
How they all get here to us?
They get lost in the time or space
There's a hope for them
that nothing bad happens
and they return one time, back upward

When they'll see this world
Which falls to my appearance
like lipstick to your lip
it was only such word play (pun)

(yeah) you give them names and surnames
(yeah) you hold them like a heart in the palm
(yeah) you save them to not injure themselves
(yeah) you hold them like a heart in the palm
2nd voice: Heart in the palm
(yeah) you have them all only to play with them
2nd voice: Heart in the palm
(yeah) you hold them like a heart in the palm
2nd voice: Heart in the palm
(yeah) you save them to not injure themselves
2nd voice: Heart in the palm
(yeah) you hold them like a heart in the palm

And Na'vi version. I refer to stars using "fo" like they are living things, although more correct would be to use inanimate "(ay)sa'u". But this way it looks and sounds better. I hope song is singable, more or less (there are some problems with ejectives and at some points syllable count is not good), although some improvement would be useful - you can propose, if you feel you've found better words.
Sivunu ayngaru fìtìrol.

Tsyokxmì

Zarmup aysanhì nekll zarmup
Fpe' yola aungiati oengaru
Zong awngeyä sireat sìreytisì
Zarmup aysanhì oengeo
Tsole'a tsat fa ngeyä menari
Ha rutxe kea txopu ulte rä'ä lopx

Le'aw takip sanhì
Rolun 'awa fya'ot
Fte tsivun kllkivä
Zivup ne ngeyä lew nariyä

(ye-e) Ngal terìng foru lora aystxoti
(ye-e) fyerep fot na txe'lan tsyokxmì
(ye-e) zerong fot fteke skxir sivi
(ye-e) fyerep fot na txe'lan tsyokxmì

Zarmup aysanhì nekll zarmup
Fyape oengne ayfo  zola'u?
Kxawm fo 'ia mì hrr fu tsengeomì
Fkeytok säsìlpeyo foru
A kekem afe' ke layen foru
Sì kxawm trro tätxaw ne taw ne'ìm

Krra tsalye'a kifkeyt
A zup ne oey tìlam
Pxel 'opin ne seyri ngey
Tsaw lu nì'aw lì'uvantsyìp

(ye-e) Ngal terìng foru lora aystxoti
(ye-e) fyerep fot na txe'lan tsyokxmì
(ye-e) zerong fot fteke skxir sivi
(ye-e) fyerep fot na txe'lan tsyokxmì
Muvea mokri: txe'lan tsyokxmì
(ye-e) lu ngaru ayfo fte uvan sivi
Muvea mokri: txe'lan tsyokxmì
(ye-e) fyerep fot na txe'lan tsyokxmì
Muvea mokri: txe'lan tsyokxmì
(ye-e) zerong fot fteke skxir sivi
Muvea mokri: txe'lan tsyokxmì
(ye-e) fyerep fot na txe'lan tsyokxmì

[Plumps]

Law oer fwa nga ralpoleng nìyawr Seysonìltsan! Awngal kin sìrolti nì'ul sì rolyut kop
Tewti, fìlawrìl memikyunti tayok fìtrro

Spoiler

I'm sure you translated correctly Bravo! We need more songs and also more singers
Wow, this melody will be in my ears all day long

[Tìtstewan]

Txantsan ma Blue Elf!
It would be nice, if you could try to sing that song.

[Kamean]

Txantsan ma Blue Elf!
It would be nice, if you could try to sing that song.

Mllte nìwotx. Karma ngaru!

[Blue Elf]

Txantsan ma Blue Elf!
It would be nice, if you could try to sing that song.

Maybe I'll try... it depends on free time I have not and whether I find good recording of this song which allow to mute original singing. sometimes it is difficult to find such version.

Mllte nìwotx. Karma ngaru!

Fì'uri irayo, slä fpìl futa oe ke pxan

As you liked it, I'm more than happy!