Pamtseo

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eejmensenikbenhet

Pamtseo

Pamtseo lamu yawntu a'awve
Ulte tsaw layu syen.
Pamtseo zusawkrrä
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrrä.

Rey oeyä pamtseoluke
Livu keltsun fwa kem si.
Fìkifkeymì tìngäzìkä,
Pamtseol za'ärìp oet.



Pamtseo lamu yawntu a'awve
Ulte tsaw layu syen.
Pamtseo zusawkrrä
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrrä.
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrrä.
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrrä.



Pamtseo lamu yawntu a'awve
Ulte tsaw layu syen.
Pamtseo zusawkrryä
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrrä.

Rey oeyä pamtseoluke
Livu keltsun fwa kem si.
Fìkifkeymì tìngäzìkä,
Pamtseol za'ärìp oet.



A true story, displayed in one of the best songs ever made. Tried to translate it into Na'vi. Probably, there are some errors. Please correct them if you find them. After all, I'm still a human, trying to learn.
EDIT: Plumps' corrections.

Plumps

Great song!!! :D

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on February 01, 2011, 11:58:18 AM
Pamtseo

Pamtseo lamu yawntu a'awve
Ulte tsaw layu syen. => or tsa'u
Pamtseo zusawkrryä
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrryä.

Rey oeyä pamtseoluke => also: tìrusey oeyä ... or fwa rey oeyä...
Livu keltsun fwa kem si.
Fìkifkeymì tìngäzìkä, => sìngäzìkä, if you want to go with the direct line
Pamtseol za'ärìp oet.


{see above}


eejmensenikbenhet

Quote from: Plumps on February 07, 2011, 04:41:59 PM
Great song!!! :D

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on February 01, 2011, 11:58:18 AM
Pamtseo

Pamtseo lamu yawntu a'awve
Ulte tsaw layu syen. => or tsa'u
Pamtseo zusawkrryä
Sì pamtseo ftawnemkrryä.

Rey oeyä pamtseoluke => also: tìrusey oeyä ... or fwa rey oeyä...
Livu keltsun fwa kem si.
Fìkifkeymì tìngäzìkä, => sìngäzìkä, if you want to go with the direct line
Pamtseol za'ärìp oet.


{see above}

Thanks for corrections, ma tsmukan. I think I'll still go for rey oeyä pamtseoluke...
And I think tsaw fits better then tsa'u on the melody.

hemmond

Can I ask you, which for which melody is these lyrics made?
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eejmensenikbenhet

Quote from: hemmond on February 11, 2011, 09:17:07 AM
Can I ask you, which for which melody is these lyrics made?
Translate the title :P
Pamtseo - Music
Hmm, what song would that be?

hemmond

Quote from: eejmensenikbenhet on February 11, 2011, 09:23:28 AM
Quote from: hemmond on February 11, 2011, 09:17:07 AM
Can I ask you, which for which melody is these lyrics made?
Translate the title :P
Pamtseo - Music
Hmm, what song would that be?
I know what title means, but idk that song. :D
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http://twitter.com/hemmondssandbox

If it's change in you, then the world is changing too.
--22nd World Scout Jamboree anthem.

eejmensenikbenhet