Song I've written recently

Started by Ezy Ryder, October 15, 2012, 07:52:07 AM

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Ezy Ryder

I was curious how hard would it be to write a song in Na'vi with rhymes, so I tried. That's the first song I've ever written, so don't expect too much. I also made the music (or subconsciously ripped someone off :) ). I'm not known for speaking too clearly, so the lyrics are also in the description and a spoiler below. I hope I haven't made too many mistakes.
Way nìNa'vi

Tirea Aean

nice! I can respect this, even relate to it. You inspire me to do the same: go grab the ol guitar and youtube an original song. :)

Just some little stuff about grammar.

Lamu nì'awtu oe
Krrmì a ramun poet
'amefu nitram
Vay txonam
Ftolang yawne livu oeru

Tsamun ultxa sivi
Nì'aw ayunilmì
Nerume lì'fyati peyä
Fa fwa sar krrit oeyä
Pehem lu swey?

New 'ivefu tìyawnit nìmun
Slä set, oe ke tsun
Hufwa oe fmi
Nga tsun spivaw oeti

Blue Elf

Not bad! It nice to see that new songs are still created. Just pitty that you mic is quite low quality (or is it noise from computer?)
I think that some lines are too long to fit in melody, but, I know, it is not easy. Applause for you!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


hemmond

Has this song a name? :) I'd like to add it to the List, but to do that, I'm gonna need a name. :D
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