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Steyki
« on: January 17, 2011, 11:31:15 am »
It is done. here is the full version.

http://tirearadio.com/Steyki.mp3

lu yawne oer nìngay krr a ayngal nivew tìnusumet
slä oeti steyki fì'ul a ye'rìn ke tok oel fìtsenget

nìawnomum tsari kllfro' oe
alu aysngä'iyur kivar
fte tsivun eylan slivu ayoe
ulte nivew vivar
lì'fyari lena'vi nìngay oeru sunu tìkusar
prrte' oeru frato lu fwa srung si oe ayngar

lu yawne oer nìngay krr a ayngal nivew tìnusumet
slä oet steyki fì'ul a ye'rìn ke tok oel fìtsenget

lasyu Tirea Aean oe krrä tì'i'avay
kop fì'uri alahe pänutìng ayngar nìngay
tasyätxaw mì zusawkrr slä ke'u tsakrrvay
meoauniaea sì Teoä fpom angay
liyevu ayngaru a fut oel ayngafpi rangal set
nìtxan keftxo nì'aw ke lu muiä ke längu prrte'
tengkrr ftia fte oey tìrey ke liyevu kawng
irayo si ayngaru a larmu yawne nìhawng

lu yawne oer nìngay krr a ayngal nivew tìnusumet
slä oeti steyki fì'ul a ye'rìn ke tok oel fìtsenget
 
kop sìlpey tsnì aynga luke oe tsivun rivey
talun oel fpìl futa lasyu ngäzìk fpi ronsem oey
livu txantsan krr a tätxaw ulte ke zene pivey
ulte tsakrr liveiu oer apxa lrrtok mì hey
leiu olo' ayawne LeL-NeN na oey swey eylan
keng tsakrrta a slu hapxìtu mì zìsìt aham
nìngay ke tsun ayngaru fa aylì'u piveng nìtam
slä mi lu oeru faylì'u na ayskxe mì oey txe'lan

ta oey txe'lan fì'upxare nìngay zola'ängu
ulte peng ayngaru san lasyängu stxong ayngaftu
rutxe fpi oe var slirvu leNa'via aysulfätu
ma oeyä eylan Kiyevam ulte Yawey ayngahu...
« Last Edit: January 25, 2011, 10:55:24 pm by Tirea Aean »

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #1 on: January 17, 2011, 12:35:00 pm »
Yea! nice one :)
sorry I don't have time to look at the text, but I like it because it's nìna'vi :)

who do you're featuring? didn't get the name "txonä rolyu" -> "Txonä Te Unil Stä'nìyu Rolyusì" ?
« Last Edit: January 17, 2011, 12:40:23 pm by Talis »

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2011, 12:39:10 pm »
Thankyou!

it means a lot to me, this song.

when you get time, check out the text. it has much sorrowful meaning. maybe not as sorrowful as the meaning of your song, but still sad. :(

The original beta featured Txonä Rolyu a buddy of mine... but the posted beta has the choruslines removed. the original beta is the same address without the 2 if you REALLY wanted to listen to the general idea of it..
« Last Edit: January 17, 2011, 12:42:25 pm by Tirea Aean »

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 04:42:51 pm »
Thankyou!

it means a lot to me, this song.

when you get time, check out the text. it has much sorrowful meaning. maybe not as sorrowful as the meaning of your song, but still sad. :(

Tsat oel tse’a, ma oeyä ’eylan!
Oel ngati kameie!
Fìtìrol lu lor nìtxan nìngay… nìpawnlltxe srekrr, tìrusol lu sweya fya’o a lawk sì’efuti.
Tìkangkem asìltsan!

Don’t know if you wanted to be checked for typos/errors?
I thought after tengkrr there had to be ‹er› in the following verb…
zola’äng’u should be zola’ängu, right?
I guess your swey instead of sweya eylan in the last verse is the rapper’s freedom, kefyak? ;)

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 05:32:53 pm »
Oh my god, this is amazing.
It would be an honour to rap with you Tirea, if we are able to do a collaboration project?


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Re: Steyki
« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2011, 12:42:26 pm »
New beta. see post one. opinions please ;D

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2011, 12:50:15 pm »
Hm, interesting. I like it :) A bit clearer and better to understand

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 01:20:32 pm »
Oh my god, this is amazing.
It would be an honour to rap with you Tirea, if we are able to do a collaboration project?

I didnt even catch this comment. Yeah, upon my return perhaps we can.

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 01:21:13 pm »
Thanks all for blatant honesty and opinions. This is why I release non-final versions. ;D

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 03:17:18 pm »
I can understand the new version much better! The rap is louder now, isn't it?
... who is singing the 'hook'? Since you didn't said "featuring Txonä Rolyu", is it you, ma Tirea?

but I stay on my point, which I told you already: I like the version, in which you and Txonä Rolyu are singing the 'hook' the most ;) :)
just turn up the volume of the rap there, and everything is fine to me ;D

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #10 on: January 24, 2011, 03:25:08 pm »
I forgot to say ft Txonä Rolyu in beta 3! HrH sorry!

so far, everyone likes beta 3. the hook is txonä only. I have asked Jordan Cansington to help with that. though I feel like I am annoying her to death D: I don't wanna do the hook cuz my singin voice is soooo bad XD

yes, the rap volume and pan has been adjusted.

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #11 on: January 25, 2011, 09:27:18 am »
Do I understand right it's a goodbye, see you later song is?
It think its good.

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #12 on: January 25, 2011, 09:50:05 pm »
new beta. post 1. this may be final.


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Re: Steyki
« Reply #13 on: January 25, 2011, 10:23:18 pm »
Very purdey.  Can't wait to listen to the whole thing tomorrow at school.  Hope I don't cry :(

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #14 on: January 26, 2011, 06:55:40 am »
It's totally beautiful and amazing! <3

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #15 on: January 26, 2011, 07:20:44 am »
Yes it is, and now Tirea is gone  :'( *tsngaaaaaawvìk*  :'(

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #16 on: January 26, 2011, 10:05:43 am »
The saddest 116 days ever :(

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Re: Steyki
« Reply #17 on: January 28, 2011, 06:05:05 pm »
That's all, what we have from Tirea.

The saddest 116 days ever :(
Now only 113
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