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Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« on: November 17, 2012, 10:04:22 pm »


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Tìng 'awa lunit ngal oeru
A lu swey txo 'ivì'awn
Oe fìtsenge mìyìn set
Ulte ngane tìyätxaw
Talun ngat ke new txivìng, slä
Zene nga oet meykivllte

Ranìri smon oer pum ngey, ulte ngar nìteng oey smon
Futa oel syolaw ngar nìhawng li ngal omum
Tsun syivaw nga oeru mi frakrr sì fralo
Nga zene syivaw

Tìng 'awa lunit ngal oeru
A lu swey txo 'ivì'awn
Oe fìtsenge mìyìn set
Ulte ngane tìyätxaw
Talun ngat ke new txivìng, slä
Zene nga oet meykivllte

Oel ke new futa oeti, snew fkol nìsyep nìhawng
Talun kxawm tsatsun mivunge fko oeyä neto tìrey
Nì'aw new tuteot oel fte txonmì miveyam

Oey 'ewana txe'lanur tsun yawne nga livu
Sìkin a fngo ngal oer tsun tivìng nìftxavang ngar
Ngian ke fmayi fivewi ngat fratseng
Ke kan nivekx wotxa syurat

Tìng 'awa lunit ngal oeru
A lu swey txo 'ivì'awn
Oe fìtsenge mìyìn set
Ulte ngane tìyätxaw
Talun ngat ke new txivìng, slä
Zene nga oet meykivllte

Tìng oeru lunit ma yawntu; Tìng oer lunit ngal rutxe
Tìng 'awa lunit ma yawntu; Lun a sweylu txo oe 'ivì'awn
Ngar poleng san oer lu yawne
Ulte oeri lu fra'u
« Last Edit: December 03, 2012, 03:09:59 pm by Alyara Arati »
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #1 on: November 18, 2012, 02:30:41 am »
Wou! I was just thinking about this song this morning, I woke up with it in my head :)
Great job on the translation, seems singable :D

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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #2 on: November 18, 2012, 11:57:26 am »
Very good! I love how you deal with words we do not have. And it is fantastic that this part of our forum gets very alive again!
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #3 on: November 18, 2012, 12:04:39 pm »
Ma oeyä Eywa! Very good! :o
Fascinating your talent! :D

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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #4 on: November 18, 2012, 12:41:08 pm »
Irayo ulte tstunwi!  :-* :-[ :-*
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #5 on: November 18, 2012, 12:59:24 pm »
Wou, kosman! :)
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #6 on: November 21, 2012, 03:55:13 pm »
Irayo nìmun. :D

I just wish I had a voice that could sing this well; Tracy's voice is a lot lower than mine. ::)
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #7 on: December 03, 2012, 09:30:48 am »
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Txe'lan a'ewan oey tsun livu tìyawn fpi nga

Okay, I've been listening to this recently, and I realized that, although it fits the music, it says:
"My young heart can be love for you," which doesn't really make sense.

txe'lanur a'ewan tsun livu tìyawn fpi nga has the right number of syllables, but throws the accent off on A'eWAN...

oey 'ewana txe'lanur tsun yawne nga livu has both syllables and emphasis right; can I put yawne nga between tsun and livu?

I think I can, which makes the second one the correct solution, but I'm open to any better ideas...
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #8 on: December 03, 2012, 02:10:00 pm »
In poetry and song texts rules don't have to be followed strictly, as Paul said on some occasions, so I don't see anything wrong here.
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #9 on: December 03, 2012, 03:10:30 pm »
Correction made.  Thanks again. :-*
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Re: Tìng Oeru 'Awa Lunit - Tracy Chapman
« Reply #10 on: March 12, 2013, 01:36:46 pm »
Looking forward hearing it. (Yes, I know. I know. I write this all over this place. :) I just don't want to projects like this die. :) And also I'm keen on good music. :) )
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