Author Topic: Kilvan (River - Bishop Briggs)  (Read 974 times)

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Kilvan (River - Bishop Briggs)
« on: November 04, 2019, 11:19:56 pm »
Okay, this is a moderately sloppy translation for me.  Yes, it fits the syllable count, but I left pronouns "understood" all over the place, and coined some words, most of which were done legally, I think.  Anyway, I hope you enjoy the song!  Let me know if I forgot anything...   :)



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Re: Kilvan (River - Bishop Briggs)
« Reply #1 on: November 05, 2019, 01:15:09 pm »
Okay, this is a moderately sloppy translation for me.  Yes, it fits the syllable count, but I left pronouns "understood" all over the place, and coined some words, most of which were done legally, I think.  Anyway, I hope you enjoy the song!  Let me know if I forgot anything...   :)

Yeah, I understand what you mean however I would say that it's good translation. Sunu oeru!
And song is good, I enjoyed it :)

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Re: Kilvan (River - Bishop Briggs)
« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2019, 03:49:27 pm »
Irayo ma Toliman!  Tstunwi lu nga!  I need to check out your work, and will soon; I promise! :)
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Re: Kilvan (River - Bishop Briggs)
« Reply #3 on: November 05, 2019, 03:59:40 pm »
Irayo ma Toliman!  Tstunwi lu nga!  I need to check out your work, and will soon; I promise! :)
Kea tìkin :)
I hope that you will can complete your next work here again soon.
« Last Edit: November 06, 2019, 12:13:06 am by Toliman »

 

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