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Tìterkup
« on: March 12, 2011, 06:58:49 am »
Tìterkup
rä'ä tiverkup
ma 'itan
rä'ä tiverkup
ma tìnitram

oe ke omum pehemit
kem sivi
luke nga
oe ke tsayun rivey

rutxe ke tiverkup
Eywa zivong
poru,
zong

oeyä 'itan
tererkup
Eywa srung
sivi oengar

kehe!
rä'ä tiverkup
ngat kin
oel

tìterkup
lu keftxo
slä...
tsa'uhu lu tìsìlpey

pum amip
'ayongokx
ulte layu tìnitram
ha...

ngey tirea
Eywahu set
ulte mipa rina'
lu
« Last Edit: March 15, 2011, 02:24:10 pm by Tswusayona Tsamsiyu »
Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

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Re: Tìterkup
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2011, 12:01:38 pm »
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Tìterk(us)up
ke tiverkup
ma 'itan
ke tiverkup
ma tìnitram

oel ke omum pehemit
kem sivi
luke nga
oe ke tsayun rivey

rutxe ke tiverkup
Eywa zivong
poru
zong


oeyä 'itan
tererkup
Eywa srung
sivi oengar

kehe!
ke tiverkup
nga tìkawnin
oer

tìterk(us)up
lu keftxo
slä...
tsa'uhu lu tìsìlpey

pum amip
'ayongokx
ulte layu tìnitram
ha...

ngey(ä) tirea
Eywahu set
ulte mipa rina'
lu

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Re: Tìterkup
« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2011, 12:26:46 pm »
about the rä'äs, I don't use the negative so much, so I forgot.
by kem sivi I meant "I don't know what to do without you".
you're right. I will put a "," after poru.
oengar is there because he talks to the 'itan the whole song except for the last three verses in which the 'itan has already died.
tìkawnin is supposed to be "needed", but now that I think of it, it should be kawnin, kefyak?
pum alahe-another one (will be born)
I wanted to say "death" and not "dying". that's why tìterkup and not tìtuserkup.
in the last verse - ngey and ngeyä mean the same thing as you can omit the ä if you want.

by the way, corrected what surely (for now) needs to be correct.
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oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

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Re: Tìterkup
« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2011, 01:35:43 pm »
tìkawnin is supposed to be "needed", but now that I think of it, it should be kawnin, kefyak?

Right, the problem with this is that you can’t use the past participle without a noun and therefore an attributive a. So, you can say oel kin ngat, “I need you” or mekre akawnin, “needed supplies” but not *nga lu kawnin

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Re: Tìterkup
« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2011, 02:23:39 pm »
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Nivume Na'vit, fpivìl nìNa'vi, kivame na Na'vi.....
oer fko syaw tswusayona tsamsiyu

 

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