Tìwew 'i'a (Winter Wrap Up) (My Little Pony Friendship is Magic)

[HTML_Earth]

This is by far my favourite song from the show.
There's a line which I haven't found a way to translate, and there's bound to be some grammatical mistakes.
I hope I can get enough critique in order to finish it by the 24th (1 year after it originally aired).
Some parts are a bit hard to sing, but they're all possible

Video:
Tìwew 'i'a (Winter Wrap Up nìNa'vi

Audio:
http://forum.learnnavi.org/mgallery/?sa=item;id=4017

Original Three months of winter coolness, And awesome holidays! We've kept our hoofsies warm at home, Time off from work to play. But the food we've stored is runnin' out, And we can't grow in this cold. And even though I love my boots, This fashion's getting old. The time has come to welcome spring, And all things warm and green. But it's also time to say goodbye, It's winter we must clean. How can I help? I'm new, you see, What does everypony do? How do I fit in without magic? I haven't got a clue! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! Let's finish our holiday cheer! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Bringing home the southern birds, A pegasus's job begins, And clearing all the gloomy skies To let the sunshine in. We move the clouds, And we melt the white snow. When the sun comes up Its warmth and beauty will glow! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! Let's finish our holiday cheer! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Little critters hibernate, Under the snow and ice. We wake up all the sleepy heads, So quietly and nice. We help them gather up their food, Fix their homes below. We welcome back the southern birds, So their families can grow! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! Let's finish our holiday cheer! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! No easy task to clear the ground, Plant our tiny seeds. With proper care and sunshine, Everyone it feeds. Apples, carrots, celery stalks, Colorful flowers too! We must work so very hard, It's just so much to do! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! Let's finish our holiday cheer! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Now that I know what they all do, I have to find my place! And help with all of my heart, Tough task ahead I face. How will I do without my magic, Help the earth pony way? I want to belong so I must Do my best today, Do my best today! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! Let's finish our holiday cheer! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here! Winter Wrap Up! Winter Wrap Up! 'Cause tomorrow spring is here. 'Cause tomorrow spring is here. 'Cause tomorrow spring is here!

Na'vi vosìnga kintrr a wew sì txantsana ayftxozä! lolu vawm sì wew wrrpa fratrr slä lolu tì'o' nìwä syuve lu ke kìmar talun lu wew ulte awngaru lu hol tsalsungay oeyä pen sunu oer set lìyam na ta 'okrol zola'u krr a kaltxì si eana ayuru slä zola'u krr luke herwì sì aystxeli ngaru pefya srung sivi oe? lu mip pehem frapa'li kem si? oe tsun kem sivi nìteng fyape? oe ke lu alaksi! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! 'i'a awngeyä ftxozä tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! sì tìsomit vivirä! tätxaw ayayo kelkune talun awnga syaw poru ulte piak seyki tawit fte atanit lonu awngal 'ärìp fìwopxit kem ator pìyähem tsawke fratseng tìsom lìyu lor! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! 'i'a awngeyä ftxozä tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! sì tìsomit vivirä! swirä ahì'i herahaw lu tskxepayäo ayoeng txen slu poru fa prrte'a fya'o awngal tìng peyä syuvet poru zeyko peyä helkut tätxaw ayayo fìtseng ha soaia tsawl slu! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! 'i'a awngeyä ftxozä tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! sì tìsomit vivirä! lu ke ftue a klltet hivawl rina'ti yem txo lu txana pay sì atan lu fra'u me'em tsyosyu sì ayfkxen nìpxay pxaya syulang kop a lu pxaya sìkangkemvit tìkangkemit ngivop! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! 'i'a awngeyä ftxozä tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! sì tìsomit vivirä! ha oel omum pehemti si oel zene rivun fya'ot ulte fa oeyä txe'lan oe srung sivi nìwotx oe tsun kem sivi nìteng fyape? srung sivi na hama hrr fte livam na fo tsakrr srung sivi fìtrr srung sivi fìtrr! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! 'i'a awngeyä ftxozä tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä! tìwew 'i'a! tìwew 'i'a! sì tìsomit vivirä sì tìsomit vivirä sì tìsomit vivirä!

Na'vi meaning twelve cold weeks and excellent holidays! it has been dark and cold outside every day but it has been fun anyway the food is not in season because it is cold and we have little (of it) even though I like my my clothes now they will soon look like something from ancient history the time has come to say hello to all the green things but the time has come without snow and presents for you how do I help? (I) am new what does every pony do? how can I do like them? I am not ready! end coldness! end coldness! end our holiday end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! and spread the heat! the birds return home because we call to them and clear the clouds to release the light we move the clouds, finally the sun will arrive everywhere the warmth will be beautiful end coldness! end coldness! end our holiday end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! and spread the heat! small creatures are sleeping (they) are under the ice we wake them in a nice way we give their food to them fix their homes the birds return here so the family grows end coldness! end coldness! end our holiday end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! and spread the heat! it is not easy to prepare the ground place the seeds if there is much water and light everything is harmonious food made from flower and many vegetables many flowers too that there are many small tasks creates work end coldness! end coldness! end our holiday end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! and spread the heat! now that I know what to do I must discover (my) path and with my heart I (must) help all how can I do like them? help like (in) previous times in order to then be like them help today help today end coldness! end coldness! end our holiday end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat! end coldness! end coldness! and spread the heat and spread the heat and spread the heat!

[Blue Elf]

That looks good As I don't feel myself as language master, I found only some minor mistakes (and for songs and poetry there must be some liberty). So:
vosìnga kintrr a wew - akcented ì must be here
tätxaw ayayo kelkune - no space in front of adposition connected from back side
txo lu txana pay sì atan - attributative -a- missing next to noun
oel kinzene rivun fya'ot - kin is not modal verb, zene would be ok (both grammar and meaning)
ayoenga [tìtxen si]txen slu poru - not sure if we can use tìtxen si (it is part of idiom, not alone verb). Txen slu can be better

So quietly and nice -> nìfya'o alor, *nìfnu (not necessarily correct)
Waiting for final song nìfya'o ke lemweypey

[HTML_Earth]

nìfya'o alor

I'd go with nìfya'o aprrte', but I'd like for it to end with o.
Would prrte'a nìfya'o be correct, or does the nì have to come before the adjective?

[Blue Elf]

AFAIK there is only way - nìfya'o {adjective}. See horen leNa'vi, 6.6.6.

[HTML_Earth]

Hmmm, how about fa prrte'a fya'o?

[Kamean]

Nice song.

[Blue Elf]

Hmmm, how about fa prrte'a fya'o?

IMHO it should be usable and correct

[Tsuksìm atsawl (KaPTan)]

OMG my two favorite things have now been combined!!!!
(fluttershy) yay!

[Ftiafpi]

OMG my two favorite things have now been combined!!!!
(fluttershy) yay!

Have you seen his earlier MLP tìrol nìna'vi?

[Kayrìlien]

WOW. This song is, like...at least 20% cooler than every other Na'vi language song. And most of it (especially the chorus) is very singable. Great job dude!

Kayr

[HTML_Earth]

I uploaded a video with me singing it.
It has now been one year since the original Winter Wrap Up episode aired

[Blue Elf]

Txantsan, kosman, seysonìltsan! Sunu nìtxan

[Plumps]

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Audio:
http://forum.learnnavi.org/mgallery/?sa=item;id=4017
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pelun, aú, pelun ke tsun oe sivar tsat

[HTML_Earth]

lu hìyik.
'link' amip: http://www.mediafire.com/?6t1v2eh3gpe8249

[Plumps]

lu hìyik.
'link' amip: http://www.mediafire.com/?6t1v2eh3gpe8249

lu nìngay...
ngaru seiyi irayo

[Kamean]

lu hìyik.
'link' amip: http://www.mediafire.com/?6t1v2eh3gpe8249

lu nìngay...
ngaru seiyi irayo

Ngari oe irayo seiyi nìteng.