Two Weeks- EmpathP feat DEX

Started by Vayrufkay, May 17, 2017, 12:45:01 AM

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Vayrufkay

Kaltxì! As some have read in the fan music forum, I've started to work on a project in regards to translating various Vocaloid songs.

Before we begin, I asked Empath if I could translate the song into another language, and she was completely fine with it.


Anyway, this is the first one of the project that is being worked on.

*Link to song for reference of melody*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-HtYScbpi3Q


The spoilers are two (Na'vi  and Original) versions of the lyrics.

If anyone would like to suggest lyrics or change something like wording or grammar, do feel free to post your suggestions here.


(Progress: Simplified, starting translation)


Untranslated portions (Simplified with lines from song beneath in parentheses)


niNa'vi



Original Lyrics in English







Changelog:

5/19/2017: (9:26 AM MDT) Began adjusting the second chorus, which included adding and changing out lines for others.

5/18/2017: (5:03 PM MDT) Removed simplified lyrics, added started translations for the choruses and the Syllable count of the Verses' lines to the Translation Spoiler. (7:19 PM MDT) Edited translation to what Kawnu suggested for the first chorus. (9:33 PM MDT) Re-added simplified lyrics of areas not yet attempted translation of.