Yawne Aean (adaptation of Greensleeves)

Started by Irtaviš Ačankif, August 22, 2011, 11:01:59 AM

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Irtaviš Ačankif

Okay, so here is my first pamtseo nìNa'vi nì'aw!

Anyway, it is an adaptation of the Renaissance-era English song Greensleeves. From the title you can know how utterly silly the lyrics will be:


Oeyä yawnel sì lora syulangìl munge oer fpomìt letìrey.
Yawne aean, tuté asevin - ngenga lu oeru yawne.
Tìng oel fra'uti ngaru, swizaw sì eltu lefngap kop.
Oel kameie ngati, oeru nga lu yawne.
Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

Tirea Aean

yawe is an adjective so yawnel munge fpomit (and yawne aean)doesnt make sense. (:()the noun is tìyawn, but tìyawnìl though grammatically correct would ruin the 1:1 syllable matchin you got goin on. :-\

hemmond

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Hehe. I like original Greensleeves song, and this looks really good. :) Tell me, when it'll be finished... I might try to play it on the piano. :D

EDIT: Trying to play it on guitar... Some syllabiles matching will be diferent from yours, but if that lyrics you put here are correct, I can record version of some kind. :)
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