Ka Mate

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I translated the Ka Mate into Na'vi.

Oe terkup, oe terkup! Oe rey, oe rey!
Fìpoan leNa'vi kllkxem fìtseng
Pesu sami tsawkeru ulte tamung fì'u wäpintxu
'awtìrikx leta'em ulte rikx nìmun sì nìta'em
'awtìrikx leta'em sì lemun...tsawkeru wäpintxu

Spoiler

I may die, I may die! I may live, I may live!
I may die, I may die! I may live, I may live!
This the hairy man that stands here...
... who brought the sun and caused it to shine
A step upward, another step upward!
A step upward, another...The Sun shines!

i changed it into na'vi context. of obviously, the 'man' become a na'vi. this was done intentionally; so it would be great if someone could read the na'vi and translate it back to english, then i can see if the english matches what i intended.
also, this was my first translation, help me out w/ the grammar please!

ma tsmuke sì tsmukan:
tìng srung oeru rutxe, ulte ngaru seiyi irayo!