My First Na'vi Book :3

[Kamean]

Irayo, ma Kamean. It's not quite ready to be unleashed yet.

Of course, but it is cool.

[Stranger Come Knocking]

Have you any mistakes you would like to point out? >.>

[Kamean]

On page 16, translation errors - Toruk makto instead Toruk.

[Stranger Come Knocking]

On page 16, translation errors - Toruk makto instead Toruk.

Doh! >.< Irayo, ma Kamean for the reminder.  The translation matters just as much as the translated. :3

[Kamean]

Kea tìkin ma Tanhì.

[`Eylan Ayfalulukanä]

I saw some things that could use some attention. But I will look at that tomorrow. (I think most of these have been caught by others).

Slä fì`u lu TEWTI TEWTI PUK nang

This is one of the best things I have yet seen!

Keep up the good work!!

[Plumps]

"Oe nìteng tìyawn si 'em." should be "Oeru nìteng 'em yawne lu."

Somewhat dubious construction.
Not sure about it but I'm thinking of tì'usem sunu oer nìteng

And when you figure something out for this, please let me know ASAP.
I also like to cook. <-- Wanted

Well, you wanted it to be simple that's the best I can come up with. Fwa 'em sunu oer nìteng is another possibility and probably more literal. Bear in mind that this "also" is in the sense of "as well", if you want to go for "additionally" use kop

[Stranger Come Knocking]

Well, you wanted it to be simple that's the best I can come up with. Fwa 'em sunu oer nìteng is another possibility and probably more literal.

*facepalm* Exactly.  There are so many different ways to say it. For now, I'm going with the one you just mentioned.

Bear in mind that this "also" is in the sense of "as well", if you want to go for "additionally" use kop[/font][/size]

-She likes to cook.
-So do I.

Fwa 'em sunu oer nìteng.

That's my final answer, Regis.

[Alyara Arati]

Txantsan! Ma Tanhì mì Txon, ngeyä puktsyìp sunu oer nìtxan.

Useful and adorable.  Grace would have been happy to have it to teach Na'vi to the sawtute.

[Kamean]

Useful and adorable.  Grace would have been happy to have it to teach Na'vi to the sawtute.

Great idea! May be Grace appear in the second part?

[Stranger Come Knocking]

Useful and adorable.  Grace would have been happy to have it to teach Na'vi to the sawtute.

Great idea! May be Grace appear in the second part?

Sure.  I'll start on the sequel right away. Though I would love it if the first was nice and grammatically correct first.  Can I get a Yea on that?

[Tswusayona Tsamsiyu]

I just wanna warn you. don't write a sequel if you are not familiar with the advanced grammar. although you seem to be learning quickly. anyway, if you're not sure about something ask us and don't take chances.

[Stranger Come Knocking]

I just wanna warn you. don't write a sequel if you are not familiar with the advanced grammar. although you seem to be learning quickly. anyway, if you're not sure about something ask us and don't take chances.

I was joking. Besides, it could be a series of children's books. :3 Who knows?  But as of right now, there are no planned sequels.

[eejmensenikbenhet]

That would be fun! Later, when I'm older and when I have kids I will raise them bilangual (Limbourgish and Na'vi) using your books

[Stranger Come Knocking]

That would be fun! Later, when I'm older and when I have kids I will raise them bilangual (Limbourgish and Na'vi) using your books

You're 15.  You still have a few years to go.

[`Eylan Ayfalulukanä]

On page 9 (and in the index), you are using the plural of Kelutral, namely Helutral. The text indicates that you want the singular here in every case, so they should all be Kelutral. Or, am I missing something?

If you write a sequel, even with advanced grammar, I am sure the good folks here would be thrilled to help you make this as right as possible!

[Kamean]

You're 15.  You still have a few years to go.

Years pass so quickly.

[Stranger Come Knocking]

On page 9 (and in the index), you are using the plural of Kelutral, namely Helutral. The text indicates that you want the singular here in every case, so they should all be Kelutral. Or, am I missing something?

mì causes lenit, doesn't it? *checks* k -> h

If you write a sequel, even with advanced grammar, I am sure the good folks here would be thrilled to help you make this as right as possible!

Woo!  But not right now. :3 Maybe over the summer.

[eejmensenikbenhet]

That would be fun! Later, when I'm older and when I have kids I will raise them bilangual (Limbourgish and Na'vi) using your books

You're 15.  You still have a few years to go.

True
But I will really teach my children Na'vi...

[Stranger Come Knocking]

That would be fun! Later, when I'm older and when I have kids I will raise them bilangual (Limbourgish and Na'vi) using your books

You're 15.  You still have a few years to go.

True
But I will really teach my children Na'vi...

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