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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #20 on: February 12, 2012, 02:46:43 pm »
Downloading current version........ Ok
opening data file...... Ok
Performing grammar analysis...10 %...20% 30%....40%
Page 4: warning: wrong word order
Ngaru ke lu a tìkin a txopu sivi.
error: attributive -a- missing (hmm, previous version was correct, i think)
Ayoe lu samsiyu atxur ulte ayoe zene livu seykxel.
50%....60%
page 6: proposal:
Fko syaw oeyä ikranur Tawsyal ulte po lu oeru! (not wrong, but genitive sounds somewhat better)
70%
page 7: warning: number mismatch
Fìioang lu pa’li ulte fo tul nìwin na hufwe. (singular on one side, while plural on the other side. Use Fì- + po or fay- + fo)
80%....90%....100%
Analysis done, mistakes found
Sending info to the author.
Exit code: 0

(Sorry for this type of output, I couldn't resist ;D)

Very, very win, ma Blue Elf. ;D

function tsamsiyuatirey() {
function checkForErrors() {
if (corrections == confirmed) {
 alert("HEY EVERYONE!  COME CHECK OUT THIS NEW BEGINNER'S BOOK!");
}
elseif (corrections != confirmed) {
 document.post.write("Hello?  Hola?  Bonjour?  Aiya?  Kaltxì?  Help, please?  What else do I need to do?");
}
else {
 alert("HEY EVERYONE!  COME CHECK OUT THIS NEW BEGINNER'S BOOK!");
}
}
if (checkForErrors() == true) {
 document.post.write("The Library is ready to open! <br />");
 document.post.write("http://strangerreads.ucoz.com/ <br />");
 document.post.write("Two (2) books currently available!");
}
else {
 return false;
}
}

(Okay, so some of the last bit is bull, but I had to.)
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #21 on: February 12, 2012, 03:03:52 pm »
document.post.write("http://strangerreads.ucoz.com/ <br />");
Looks like very interesting project. Do you plan publish also books from other authors? I think good one could be created using Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw thread, of course if authors agree
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #22 on: February 12, 2012, 03:14:06 pm »
Quote
Looks like very interesting project.
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Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #23 on: February 12, 2012, 03:14:33 pm »
document.post.write("http://strangerreads.ucoz.com/ <br />");
Looks like very interesting project. Do you plan publish also books from other authors? I think good one could be created using Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw thread, of course if authors agree
Sure, if they want. :-\ I mean, it's a library.  All books are to be error-free (grammar, spelling, etc.) and formatted for PDF, but otherwise, anything PG-13 and under is welcome.  Stories, songbooks, grammar help, and so on are all welcome.

(Also, I have a third O'PN that I will post in this thread so I don't have to create a whole new one.  Not completed yet, but soon.)
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #24 on: February 12, 2012, 10:19:29 pm »
/**
 * Just because you guys are being hilarious with your source code and compiler output...
 */

package post;

/*
 * Java anyone?
 */

public class Post {

    public static void main(String[] args){
       
        String blueElfCompilerOutput = PostContent.get(BlueElfPostContent);

        OutputCheck analyzer = new OutputCheck(blueElfCompilerOutput);

        //hrh
        if ( ! analyzer.hasError() ){
            System.out.println("BlueElf Compiler output confirmed.");
        }else{
            System.out.println("Error found in BlueElf Compiler output.");
        }
    }
}
« Last Edit: February 12, 2012, 10:22:47 pm by Tirea Aean »

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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #25 on: February 13, 2012, 02:41:30 pm »
Sorry, don't know Java.  Haven't gotten there yet.  We're only into PHP so far.

Anyway, here is book 3, Taronyuä Tìrey
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #26 on: February 13, 2012, 04:18:56 pm »
| Tirea | Is it really that bad? :( You've been "Posting in Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi" for the last ten minutes.
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #27 on: February 13, 2012, 04:21:44 pm »
Output for most recent release:


CaseException [page 3]. Suggestion="Oel wayìntxu ngaru ayoeyä tìreyit."
CaseException; MissingSubjunctiveException [page 4]. Suggestion="Ayoe zene zamivunge syuvet oro'ru"
MissingNegationException [page 4]. Suggestion="Ayoeyä tìkangkem ke lu hasey kawkrr"
ConjunctionException; PassiveParticipleException [page 5]. Suggestion="Fu vay txon'ong krr a taronyut smarìl taron."
MissingAException; MissingSubjunctiveException; IllegalPhraseException; FutaMisuseException; MissingGenitiveException [page 6]. Suggestion="Ayoe sop na hì'ia fongu fteke livu tsuktse'a, slä apxa nìtam fte ayoeyä smar ke tsun tivul neto nìftue."
MissingPlaceholderException [page 7]. Suggestion="Taron ayoel stum fra'ut, slä munge nì'aw pumit a lu lekin."
CaseException; WordMisuseException [page 7]. Suggestion="Fra'uri ayoe irayo si Eywaru ulte ätxäle si poru tsnì pol vivewng feyä sireat"
SpellingException; CaseException [page 8]. Suggestion="Skot ayoel sar fte stivä'nì ayoeyä smarit"
MissingSubjunctiveException [page 8]. Suggestion="Ayoe zene 'ivì'awn letwan mì ayutral."                       
CaseException [page 8]. Suggestion="Ayoe ke tsun pivlltxe nìwok, nì'aw 'ärìp ayoeyä syokxit sì aymikyunit sì ketset fte pivlltxe"
LenitionException [page 9]. Suggestion="Krro Krro smarìl ayoeti 'efu ulte po tayul."
CaseException; MissingSubjunctiveException [page 8]. Suggestion="Tsakrr ayoe zene fivewi smarit kxamlä na'rìng"
MalformedGerundException [page 9]. Suggestion="Tìfusewi lu 'o' ulte tìyora' lu nì'ul lefpom"       
Idiomatic substitution suggestion [page 10] "Ayoe 'efu ngeyn..."
CaseException; MissingRefrexiveException; MissingSubjunctiveException; MissingCausitiveException [page 10]. Suggestion="Fo starsìm fte sngeykivä'i txepit sì 'ivem syuvet"   
 
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Re: Oeyä pxeyvea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #28 on: February 13, 2012, 04:29:32 pm »
Txantsan \o/

:)

 >:( >:( >:( >:( >:( ninja’d by Tirea (We need a word for Ninja ;D )

What I found:
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p. 3: Oel wayìntxu ngaru ayoeyä tìreyti
p. 4: Ayoe_ zene zamunge syuvet olo’ru.
        Ayoeyä tìkangkem ke lu hasey kawkrr.
p. 5: Ayoe hum mì leye’krra rewon ulte ke tätxaw vaykrr ayoel ’uot stä’.
        Fu vaykrr txon’ong krr a taronyu lu law slu tawnaron. => ‹awn› can never stand alone; it’s always part of an attributive adjective. ‘The hunter becomes the hunted’ is best as taronyu slu smar maybe would be better
        Tsakem len.
p. 6: Ayoe sop na hì’i fongu fte ’ivawnìm futa ketsuktse’a, slä apxa nìtam futa ayoe smar ke tsun tivul neto nìftue.
p. 7: Ayoe irayo si Eywar(u) fpì fra’u ulte pawm poel fte vivewng feyä sireat.
p. 8: Skot ayoel sar fte stivä’ ayoeyä smarit.
        Ayoe zene ’ivì’awn letwan mì ayutral. => … zene wäpivan … ???
        Ayoe ke tsun pivlltxe nìwok, nì'aw ’ärìp ayoeyä syokxit sì aymìkyunit sì ketset fte pivlltxe.  
p. 9: Ayhrro (krro krro ??? ), smarìl ayoeti ’efu ulte fo tayul. Tsakrr ayoe_ zene fivewi smarit kxamlä na’rìng. Tìfewi lu ’o’ ulte tìyora’ lu nì'ul lefpom.
p. 10: Ayoe lu ’efu ngeyn krr a ayoe tätxaw, slä ayoel syuvet zalmamalmunge fpì olo’. Fol starsìm fte sngeykivä’i txepit ulte ’em syuvet. Layu wutso anawm fìtxon! => I’m not sure but it could be possible to say … zamunge nìyll instead of fpi olo’…

There could still be other options … as Tirea has indicated ;)

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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #29 on: February 13, 2012, 04:43:15 pm »
CaseException [page 3]. Suggestion="Oel wayìntxu ngaru ayoeyä tìreyit."
CaseException; MissingSubjunctiveException [page 4]. Suggestion="Ayoe zene zamivunge syuvet oro'ru"
MissingNegationException [page 4]. Suggestion="Ayoeyä tìkangkem ke lu hasey kawkrr"
ConjunctionException; PassiveParticipleException [page 5]. Suggestion="Fu vay txon'ong krr a taronyut smarìl taron."
MissingAException; MissingSubjunctiveException; IllegalPhraseException; FutaMisuseException; MissingGenitiveException [page 6]. Suggestion="Ayoe sop na hì'ia fongu fteke livu tsuktse'a, slä apxa nìtam fte ayoeyä smar ke tsun tivul neto nìftue."
MissingPlaceholderException [page 7]. Suggestion="Taron ayoel stum fra'ut, slä munge nì'aw pumit a lu lekin."
CaseException; WordMisuseException [page 7]. Suggestion="Fra'uri ayoe irayo si Eywaru ulte ätxäle si poru tsnì pol vivewng feyä sireat"
SpellingException; CaseException [page 8]. Suggestion="Skot ayoel sar fte stivä'nì ayoeyä smarit"
MissingSubjunctiveException [page 8]. Suggestion="Ayoe zene 'ivì'awn letwan mì ayutral."                       
CaseException [page 8]. Suggestion="Ayoe ke tsun pivlltxe nìwok, nì'aw 'ärìp ayoeyä syokxit sì aymikyunit sì ketset fte pivlltxe"
LenitionException [page 9]. Suggestion="Krro Krro smarìl ayoeti 'efu ulte po tayul."
CaseException; MissingSubjunctiveException [page 8]. Suggestion="Tsakrr ayoe zene fivewi smarit kxamlä na'rìng"
MalformedGerundException [page 9]. Suggestion="Tìfusewi lu 'o' ulte tìyora' lu nì'ul lefpom"       
Idiomatic substitution suggestion [page 10] "Ayoe 'efu ngeyn..."
CaseException; MissingRefrexiveException; MissingSubjunctiveException; MissingCausitiveException [page 10]. Suggestion="Fo starsìm fte sngeykivä'i txepit sì 'ivem syuvet"   
 
| Tirea | Some days, I resent you're Editing OCD  I don't know if you have KtsEST or KTsFLSE.

Changed (before your edits).

Ninja = Ukamyu --> Shadow Warrior (took out "ts" and "si" because it sounds cooler)

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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #30 on: February 14, 2012, 05:50:28 am »
Wou, new book!
Comments about current version:

Page 4
Saronyu sulìn 'ìn frakrr. (sulìn is IMO about free time, 'ìn should be better)
Ayoe zene zamivunge syuvet orlo'ru.

Page 5
Ayoe hum mì leye'krra rewon ulte ke tätxaw vaykrr ayoel swiräot stä'nì (they are catching creatures, not things)
Tsakem len

page 7
Taron ayoel stum fraswiräti, slä munge nì'aw pumit a lu lekin. (again, how things are hunted?)

page 8
Ayoe zene wäpivan mì ayutraltsyìp. (letwan is strange here)

page 10
Ayoe ‘efu ngeyn krr a ayoe tätxaw, slä ayoel syuvet zalmamunge fpi olo'.

Good job, karma 4U!
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #31 on: February 14, 2012, 09:22:24 am »
Wou, new book!
Comments about current version:

Page 4
Saronyu sulìn 'ìn frakrr. (sulìn is IMO about free time, 'ìn should be better)
Ayoe zene zamivunge syuvet orlo'ru.

Page 5
Ayoe hum mì leye'krra rewon ulte ke tätxaw vaykrr ayoel swiräot stä'nì (they are catching creatures, not things)
Tsakem len

page 7
Taron ayoel stum fraswiräti, slä munge nì'aw pumit a lu lekin. (again, how things are hunted?)

page 8
Ayoe zene wäpivan mì ayutraltsyìp. (letwan is strange here)

page 10
Ayoe ‘efu ngeyn krr a ayoe tätxaw, slä ayoel syuvet zalmamunge fpi olo'.

Good job, karma 4U!


I agree with all of this.

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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #32 on: February 14, 2012, 05:29:41 pm »
Wou, new book!

Good job, karma 4U!
Yay! :D

Revised again.
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #33 on: February 15, 2012, 04:03:13 pm »
So then, if there is nothing else, I will add it to the Library...
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #34 on: February 15, 2012, 04:17:46 pm »
I have not had a chance to look at it. Oh well :/

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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #35 on: February 16, 2012, 03:05:23 am »
I haven't seen anything wrong in the last version, but it is good idea to read it by someone else
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #36 on: February 16, 2012, 03:36:16 pm »
/has not posted it yet

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Anyone? *looks around*
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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #37 on: February 16, 2012, 04:35:01 pm »
p. 6: Ayoe sop na/fa hì’ia fongu fteke livu tsuktse’a, slä apxa nìtam fte ayoeyä smar ke tsivun tivul neto nìftue.
because of fte ;) and yes, this can lead to double or even triple verbs including an ‹iv› :)
I’m not sure about using na here, because he is travelling in a small group and not ‘like’ a small group (like that yonder there…) … na/pxel always seems like a comparison to me. We are still waiting for an ADP ‘like, as (in the capacity of)’. Maybe fa does the trick…

p. 10: Ayoe ’efu ngeyn krr a ayoe tätxaw, slä ayoel syuvet zalmamalmunge fpi olo’.
I’m still reluctant about the ADP fpi for ‘for’ in this sentence. But apart from nìyll, I don’t have a better idea.

Tsalsungay, lam fwa fra’u eyawr lu ;)

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Re: Oeyä munea puk nìNa'vi
« Reply #38 on: February 16, 2012, 04:42:26 pm »
:D Yayz! *posts*

Irayo, ma frapo!!!  That brings the total number of books up to a whopping pxey!  Wou!  Check them out by clicking the banner below.
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Will I go before I fall
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