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What should we make the title of this story?

Wings and Blades
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Aytautral (Sky trees)
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The Palulukan's Embrace
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Aytautral Comment thread.
« on: September 22, 2011, 08:23:31 pm »
Feel free to comment on this new story!  ;D
« Last Edit: November 10, 2011, 06:55:16 pm by Txura Rolyu »
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2011, 08:33:41 pm »
Added a poll to figure out what to call this story. Feel free to post a title in the thread here to let people vote for it.
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2011, 10:25:54 pm »
That's pretty cool, ma 'itan.   ;D

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2011, 09:50:27 am »
Hmmm. interesting titles.  :D

    
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2011, 11:53:48 pm »
Na'vin will you be trackning the hybrid creature you call Tokran? I think bonding to it so soon would be rather fast for our little story.  ;)  Will you describe it and its habits?  :-\
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #5 on: September 26, 2011, 08:17:58 am »
Na'vin will you be trackning the hybrid creature you call Tokran? I think bonding to it so soon would be rather fast for our little story.  ;)  Will you describe it and its habits?  :-\

Yes of course! First encounters are never what they seem ma tsmukan.  ;D

    
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #6 on: September 26, 2011, 01:28:15 pm »
Ain't that the truth!  HRH!

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #7 on: September 29, 2011, 02:16:38 pm »
Comment threads belong in the OOC or in the Info / Support board. Just saying  ;) So you know for the next time
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #8 on: September 29, 2011, 05:02:42 pm »
Oh...  :P I dont know how to move it now that it is here. Think you could do that for me ma Txantslusam?
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #9 on: September 30, 2011, 05:17:28 am »
Oh...  :P I dont know how to move it now that it is here. Think you could do that for me ma Txantslusam?

I don't remember how to do, but you can ask a mod to do it  ;)
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #10 on: October 07, 2011, 07:27:37 pm »
Has anybody heard from Seze Mune?
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2011, 02:08:54 am »
I think it is very interesting how my little RP is the only thing running along in this thread...   ;D
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #12 on: October 17, 2011, 06:39:45 pm »
True!
And its a good RP at that.

    
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #13 on: October 17, 2011, 07:40:54 pm »
Agreed.  ;)
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #14 on: October 17, 2011, 07:41:54 pm »
Thoroughly enjoyable with good partners like you guys!!!

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #15 on: October 18, 2011, 10:58:09 am »
Thoroughly enjoyable with good partners like you guys!!!

<3  Love you Seze :P

    
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #16 on: October 18, 2011, 09:59:53 pm »
Thoroughly enjoyable with good partners like you guys!!!

<3  Love you Seze :P

You too, ma tsmukan.  ;)

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #17 on: October 21, 2011, 01:12:06 am »
Great job on your posts both of you.  :D

For the next few posts I have some questions.

Premal: I am sure she doesnt consider her cave safe anymore. Will she seek out a differnt temporary place to stay for the time being? I am thinking that the time in the story for Premal and Na'vin at the moment is late afternoon. You wont have much daylight left to find a temp home and some food other than the yayo snacks.

Na'vin: You just failed, how does that feel? You have always succeeded before this point and now it must be a humbling experience. Also you have food and a place to stay for the night to think about.

Wangari: Where is she in the forest at the moment? Could she and Na'vin happen across each other and make camp together?

Just things to consider as the day gets wrapped up in the story. Sulani and Atan'eko are currently asleep waiting for the next day to start.

I am eager to hear from you guys on what your plans are.  :)

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Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #18 on: October 21, 2011, 04:01:44 pm »
Noted and in progress.  ;D

    
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Re: (Title to come soon) Comment thread.
« Reply #19 on: October 21, 2011, 06:43:44 pm »
↑ Same here.  There are several possibilities for Wangari.  Probably one primary one for Premal.

 

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