Aytautral Comment thread.

Started by Txura Rolyu, September 22, 2011, 08:23:31 PM

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What should we make the title of this story?

Wings and Blades
1 (20%)
Aytautral (Sky trees)
4 (80%)
The Palulukan's Embrace
0 (0%)
(something else that you think sounds cool)
0 (0%)

Total Members Voted: 4

Seze Mune

Maybe we should take Steel and Talons off the list.  The Na'vi don't have steel.  Unless it is important to Na'vin's backstory?

Txura Rolyu

Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

Txura Rolyu

@ Sulani

I believe that Atan had already spoken about the "grey behemouths" to you. He saw them in the first part of this story. Maybe you can recall how he described them.
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

Txura Rolyu

I have decided to make the voting final since there wasnt really any new ideas and the votes have already been placed. New title to the story is "Aytautral"  :D
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

Seze Mune

Quote from: Txura Rolyu on November 10, 2011, 06:56:10 PM
I have decided to make the voting final since there wasnt really any new ideas and the votes have already been placed. New title to the story is "Aytautral"  :D

What does that mean?

Txura Rolyu

#45
Tautral: sky tree.

I simply added the ay- prefix to make it "sky trees". The title is open to changing over time as this story progresses, I just really wanted to get a title up.

Also just reset all the voting. In the next few months I will change the title if the votes show a wish to change the title.
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

Seze Mune

"Taw" meaning 'sky' as in 'tawtute'

So the 'w' is dropped (lenited?) in 'ta(w)utral'.

Oh, and irayo seiyi for adding the Palulukan's Embrace!  (I think you might want to change the spelling?)

Makto ko!

Seze Mune

#47
Okay, after reading a bit of Na'vi in a Nutshell (sections 1.2.1 and 2.1 both), I realized that the plural of tautral is aysautral because lenition occurs when you pluralize any noun which begins with certain letters, including 't'.  You have the option of leaving off the 'ay+' bit and letting it become Sautral which means the same thing as Aysautral.  It's just the short form.  Thought you'd like to know oe nivume. :)

Txura Rolyu

Will Na'vin and Wangari be making a reapearance now? I think Atan and Premal had a lot of face time.  :D
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

ExLibrisMortis

Is there somewhere I can go to read a snyopsis of this RP? What's the setting, time, etc?

Na'vin Nos'feratxu

Quote from: ExLibrisMortis on January 23, 2012, 09:14:26 AM
Is there somewhere I can go to read a snyopsis of this RP? What's the setting, time, etc?

Good sir, I would highly recommend you read from the start to our current position.
I'm not just saying that to make you read it, doing so will allow you to fathom the setting, time and mood.
Not to mention its like reading a really good book, your drawn in once you start reading it.

I must say though, at the beginning it will seem a little rough around the edges but it picks up very well a quarter of the way through.
If/when you finish reading it, we would love to hear your thoughts!
As of right now we have a great deal of events planned, very VERY climactic and full of action. Along with some unsuspecting turns!
I do hope you find some time to read it through, thanks for stopping by!

-Na'vin Nos'feratu 

   
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ExLibrisMortis

The question was more of one asking what time, in relation to the movie, is this RP starting in and taking place.

Seze Mune

Quote from: ExLibrisMortis on January 24, 2012, 08:52:09 AM
The question was more of one asking what time, in relation to the movie, is this RP starting in and taking place.

That's a good question, Ma ExLibris.  I don't think we really placed it with reference to the movie.  Is there something you've noticed relative to that, which makes you question it?

ExLibrisMortis

I'm honestly just looking for an RP to join. But I prefer playing RDA characters a bit more than Na'vi.

Na'vin Nos'feratxu

#54
Quote from: ExLibrisMortis on January 25, 2012, 01:01:27 AM
I'm honestly just looking for an RP to join. But I prefer playing RDA characters a bit more than Na'vi.

Well, our timeline like Seze said, hasnt really been.. Given.
The Humans/RDA are still on the planet, and we've had several interactions with them. So is it in parallel with the Movie? I would say no.
We havent related our own timeline with the movie at all, so you could read the entire RP and still not know. Thats how we intend to keep it.

As for people joining the RP, we currently have 3 people in this RP total.
Me, Seze and Txura.  You arent the only one to ask to join the RP, but if your serious and genuinely interested, Seze, Txura and I will talk about it and get back to you.

This is a sometimes slow, but usually rich in detail type of RP.  If you havent noticed, each of our posts are quite long, and sometimes can contain as many as 4-5 paragraphs.
We dont usually like to do short posts as it wont be as interesting just reading reply after reply to each previous post.

Like I said, if your are genuinely interested, we will talk about it. In the meantime could you perhaps give us an example of your work? (Please post it HERE in this thread)  

   
NotW#82


Na'vin Nos'feratxu

We will get back to you soon Libris :)

You do nice work by the way  8)
What happened to your old RP? Did it just stop? Or?

   
NotW#82

ExLibrisMortis

well two of the main posters were in a relationship, that didn't pan out... and things just fell apart from there.

Na'vin Nos'feratxu


   
NotW#82

Txura Rolyu

It would be really cool to add an RDA side to all this. Explain all the testing on Na'vin and all that.

Personally I think the story is Pre-"film". I dont really want the two stories to mesh because I want to keep the story something of its own. Also its more for fun and games  :D
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*