Na'vi game: Run k(x)eyeyt

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Wllìm

Quote from: Vawmataw on September 01, 2014, 12:05:05 PM
Just saying, you both corrected only 3/4 of the sentences.
Hmm, I don't see an error in sentence 4, except if you count the fact that "säfpìlpe" and "a teri ..." are not adjacent... As I said, that may be clearer, but as far as I know, it is not a real error... :-\

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Blue Elf

Quote from: Wllìm on September 01, 2014, 11:51:53 AM
1. Poltxe oel sanit Sunu oer fwa tìkxey si sìk. ("san" is not a noun and thus should not have patientive case.)
Either add fwa or remove si (meaning is a little different in both cases)
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2. Neytiril yoluom breadit (?) ulte poru ke sunu fìsyuve. ("yom", not "yum". I guess "bread" is meant as a loan? I don't know whether you consider that an error.)
Fixed correctly. For bread we have some loaned words: matsa, hametsì (probably not the same bread as we know)
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3. Frapo kem si keyey nui. (Well, that changes the meaning quite a bit of course... :P But I think that you do not "do mistakes". At least it would be "kem si keyeyur" then, but I don't think that works... Summary: I think the sentence is wrong, but I don't know how to correct it properly.)
there's more ways how to say this. I probably would prefer Frapo tìkxey si
Quote4. Säfpìlpe lu ngar a teri fìlì'u alu nì'ango? (This one is correct I think. However it may be clearer to put the subclause next to the noun it belongs to.)
So I think the correct sentence is 4 :)
It looks very literally, although I could agree with this form. But i would try:
Nga fyape fpìl teri fìlì'u alu nì'ango?
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Wllìm

Quote from: Blue Elf on September 01, 2014, 01:53:39 PM
there's more ways how to say this. I probably would prefer Frapo tìkxey si
Oh, I knew that there was some si verb meaning "making mistakes", but I couldn't find it, as I was searching on *kxeyey si. *facepalm*
Irayo for fixing my confusion! :)

Vawmataw

#124
I don't know if I should wait for Tirea Aean before I give the results...
well, ok. So, here are the results:

1. Poltxe oe san Sunu oer fwa tìkxey si sìk.
2. Neytiril yolom tsyosyuti ulte poru ke sunu fìsyuve/tsasyuve.
3. Frapo tìkxey si.
4. Nga fyape fpìl teri fìlì'u alu nì'ango? (Blue Elf's proposal is good)

If anyone wants to submit new sentences, welcome!
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Vawmataw

Happy 7th anniversary to this game ;D

Correct these 5 sentences:

1. Txo oe zoplo soli ngaru rutxe peng oet.
2. Futa poel fpìl tsatseng kilvan nawang hu pum alahe.
3. Vll azusup tängakuk ngat.
4. Kea tokx zola'u krra zola'up Ninwey.
5. Zawprrte' oene fwa fiuvan si.
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Syatikrel

1) Frawzo


2) Clause error.

Futa <-- (poel fpìl) tsateng kilvan nawang hu pum alahe. (Hek nìtxan.)

Lì'ukìng azeykawno.
Poel fpìl futa tsateng kilvan nawang hu pum alahe.


3) Lì'uri a'awve kin uolì'uvit alu -ìl.


4) Kemlì'uri a'awve zene fkeytivok lì'u alu ke tsalì'usre.


5) fiuvan si

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