My First Paragraph. - Father and Me

[Tanhì'itan]

I have only been learning Na'vi for what is still less than 24 hours. I've written a few sentences that took me about 10 minutes to cpmplete. The words in bold are words I had to refer to the Na'Vi Vocabulary PDF's for. The translation is below in beige, to see it simply highlight it. I expect many corrections, let them at me. It's a learning process, I am willing to look like a fool for the sake of learning.

Kaltxì asmuktu. Ayfol syaw oeti Atan Zongyu ulte ayfol syaw oeyä  ma sempul JakeSully. Oe taron hu ma sempul nìwotx tyrr fa metsko. Oeyä aysmuké nume ta sa'nu. Oeyä sa'nul lu Neytiri. Kelutrelil lu ayoengyä kelku.

Hello siblings. They call me Atan Zongyu and they call my father JakeSUlly. I hunt with my father all days with bows. (I used metsko for a pair of bows - mine and my father's). My sisters learn from mother. My mother be (is) Neytiri. Home tree be(is) our home.

[Eywayä Irrtok]

I have only been learning Na'vi for what is still less than 24 hours. I've written a few sentences that took me about 10 minutes to cpmplete. The words in bold are words I had to refer to the Na'Vi Vocabulary PDF's for. The translation is below in beige, to see it simply highlight it. I expect many corrections, let them at me. It's a learning process, I am willing to look like a fool for the sake of learning.

Kaltxì asmuktu. Ayfol syaw oeti Atan Zongyu ulte ayfol syaw oeyä ma sempul JakeSully. Oe taron hu ma sempul nìwotx tyrr fa metsko. Oeyä aysmuké nume ta sa'nu. Oeyä sa'nul lu Neytiri. Kelutrelil lu ayoengyä kelku.

Hello siblings. They call me Atan Zongyu and they call my father JakeSUlly. I hunt with my father all days with bows. (I used metsko for a pair of bows - mine and my father's). My sisters learn from mother. My mother be (is) Neytiri. Home tree be(is) our home.

ayfol syaw oeyä ma sempul JakeSully    should be      ayfol syaw oeyä ma sempulti JakeSully

apart from that, very good for only one day

[Tanhì'itan]

I've waited all day for a review, than you for the correction. I believe I have the basics of how to structure sentences and grasp of the rules of infixes, suffixes and preffixes. I do however lack vocabulary and that shall be my text task. Once again thank you for the review, I'm glad I wasnt a failure.

[Eywayä Irrtok]

lol failure?? Na'vi is barely a language at all yet, you cant fail at something that hasn't even begun...