My first Sentance

Started by mrnapolean1, February 21, 2010, 09:25:54 PM

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mrnapolean1

Kaltxì Brandie, eltu si kìyevame

Correct me if i am wrong.

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Quote from: mrnapolean1 on February 21, 2010, 09:25:54 PM
Kaltxì Brandie, eltu si kìyevame
Hello Brandie, pay attention farewell.

Not entirely sure what you were going for here.
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Kxani

I tthink you should use ulte instead.. correct me if I am wrong here...

jasgor9

I think Kxanì Tsaheylu is right. I think you should say 'ulte' after Kaltxi Brandie. Also, I'm not sure why you are saying 'pay attention goodbye'. If you are going for something else, then that part might need rewritten.

Kxani

Checked it up, It shall be Ulte :()

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Quote from: mrnapolean1 on February 21, 2010, 09:25:54 PM
Kaltxì Brandie, eltu si kìyevame

Correct me if i am wrong.

If you are addressing Brandie it should be Kaltxì ma Brandie. I'm not sure what you mean by the rest but I'm going to agree with everyone else and go with ...eltu si ulte kìyevame. unless you meant to say something else.
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