Na'vi Valentines - Language Help requested

[ToktorGrace]

Hey all! I tried my best with these (some are straight from Frommer or the movie but a few are not) so if anyone could be so kind as to correct my errors I will be able to go back and fix these, so everyone can use them

Link to the Valentines (as pictures): http://truro.deviantart.com/art/AVATAR-Valentines-194534382

Phrases I'm questioning:

Kivar oet kameie - "Teach me to see"
'Ivefu zene ngati mìfa - "This you must feel inside"

Thank you so much for your time and patience! 

['Oma Tirea]

For the first phrase I would say kivar oeru fte kameie.  Here there is an implied fya'ot.

Second phrase I would say Fì'uri zene nga 'ivefu mìfa.

[Sireayä mokri]

For the first phrase I would say kivar oeru fte kameie.  Here there is an implied fya'ot.

This way seems a little weird to me*. I would stick with modal syntax: kivar oeti kivame*.

Agree on the second one.

[Carborundum]

For the first phrase I would say kivar oeru fte kameie.  Here there is an implied fya'ot.

This way seems a little weird to me*. I would stick with modal syntax: kivar oeti kivame*.

Agree on the second one.

Problems: kar is not modal, and even if it was, modal verbs are intransitive (with the exception of new and kan, and even they cannot have both a direct object and a controlled verb (unless that verb is inside a direct object clause) at the same time).

I think kivar oeru fte kivameie is fine.

[Sireayä mokri]

Srane, now I see it wouldn't work this way. But still I don't like fte here.

[Kemaweyan]

I think kivar oeru fte kivameie is fine.

I think kivar oeti furia kame

[Carborundum]

I think kivar oeru fte kivameie is fine.

I think kivar oeti furia kame

I don't like this for two reasons:

1. We don't know that kar is transitive.
My bad; we got confirmation that it is indeed transitive from the christmas songs.

2. Topicals should be clause initial.

[Kemaweyan]

2. Topicals should be clause initial.

Well.. Furia kame kivar oeti.

[Sireayä mokri]

Even though it is the line from the movie, I think it's "incorrect" from Na'vi point of view because "No one can teach you to See"

[Ataeghane]

Even though it is the line from the movie, I think it's "incorrect" from Na'vi point of view because "No one can teach you to See"

Except for that, what about: kar oeri tìkusamet?

[Sireayä mokri]

Except for that, what about: kar oeri tìkusamet?

1. We still don't know how kar works in such constructions. 2. Stylistically seems weird to me.