Practise please correct.

[Tolaro´ni´tirea]

Kaltxi


This time I try some longer sentences

Oe Na´vi nume fteke sí aynga tsun plltxe.
I learn Na´vi, so that I can speak to you

Oe-l  hi´i aturuk tolspang.
I hunted a small turuk.

Oe  siltsan lu srak?
Am I good?

Oe-l kä Kelutral-it sí Tsu´tey.
I go to the Hometree with tsu´tey

Tsu´tey titxur-a tsamsiyu lu.
Tsu´tey is a strong Warrioir.

Oeyä Ikranil Oe-ti fmi (-a?) tolspang.
My Banshee tried to kill me.

[Taronyu]

Oe Na´vi nume fteke sí aynga tsun plltxe.
I learn Na´vi, so that I can speak to you

Oel na'viti nume. You need the markers for case here. fteke means so that not: fte is better. No need for the sì.

Oe-l  hi´i aturuk tolspang.
I hunted a small turuk.

Oel hi'ia turukti tolaron. Accusitive marker, and the correct verb taron. 

Oe  siltsan lu srak?
Am I good?

Sounds right, but sìltsan is the correct spelling.

Oe-l kä Kelutral-it sí Tsu´tey.
I go to the Hometree with tsu´tey.

No ergative marker here for Oe, since go isn't transitive. ne is the correct particle for towards. sì means and, not with - use hu (should work).

Tsu´tey titxur atsamsiyu lu.
Tsu´tey is a strong Warrioir.

the a needs to go on strong, not warrior.

Oeyä Ikranil Oe-ti fmi (-a?) tolspang.
My Banshee tried to kill me.

No a on fmi.

Good job dude.

[Tolaro´ni´tirea]

Irayo

here are the sentencces corrected:

Oe-l na´vi-ti nume fte aynga tsun plltxe.
Oe-l hi´i-a turukti tolaron.
Oe kä ne Kelutral hu-Tsu´tey

[Nuruhuine]

Kaltxi ma Tolaro´ni´tirea,
Ta Skype William oe lu.
Oel ngati kameie.
Ngaru lu fpom srak?

Oe Na´vi nume fteke sí aynga tsun plltxe.
I learn Na´vi, so that I can speak to you
==> IMO, the DAT would work better here:
Na'vi nume oe fteke ayngaru tsun plltxe.

Oe-l  hi´i aturuk tolspang.
I hunted a small turuk.
==> Oel turukit ahi'i tolaron.
You can't use the ERG without the ACC, they come as a pair. I put a "a" before "hi'i" because it should be placed between the noun and the adj. "hi'ia turukit" should work too IMO.

Oe  siltsan lu srak?
Am I good?
==> Looks correct to me.

Oe-l kä Kelutral-it sí Tsu´tey.
I go to the Hometree with tsu´tey
==> No need for ERG nor ACC here, "go" isn't transitive I think.
for "with" accompaniment you need "hu", not "si". You also need "ne" for the direction (to).
Ne kelutral kä Tsu'tey hu oe.

Tsu´tey titxur-a tsamsiyu lu.
Tsu´tey is a strong Warrioir.
==> "txur" is already an adj, no need for the "ti" prefix.
Txura tsamsiyu Tsu'tey hu.

Oeyä Ikranil Oe-ti fmi (-a?) tolspang.
My Banshee tried to kill me.
==> I'm a bit at a loss here, with "Ikranil"... Is the "i" between the last consonant and the ERG (l) attested?
Other than that, seems to be correct. You don't need the "a" though IMO


Nga niNa'vi plltxe niltsan nang!
Eywa ngahu ma tsmukan.

Niyevame!

-Nuru.