Eywa's Creation

[Ateyo Te Syaksyuk]

I wrote this with corrections from Tirea Aean!
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Far far far above us                           ALìM ALìM ALìM IO AYOENG
outside the black of sKY                WRRPA LAYONA TAW
Ewya washed her hair                        EYWAL YAMUR SNEYä  NIKRET
Sending droplets of water                ULTE TSAKRR TUNGZUP  AYFAYìVA
To sparkle in the darkness                NA TEPVI MÌ SìVAWM
And she called them stars                SYAW AYFORU AYSANHì
She squeezed her hands together        POE  MESYOKXIT AWSìTENG
And made two suns in the sky        NGAMOP MESAWKETI MÌ SAW
She made these wonderful things         KOSMANA AYFì'UTI NìWOTX
For her pleasure                                FPI SNEYä TìPRRTE'
But Eywa makes time to listen        SLä FRAKRR EYWARU LU KRR fte TIVÌNG MIKYUN
to all hearts who sing of                NìWOTX AYTE'LANUR A ROL POEYä
wonderful creation                        KOSMANA  TìNGOPTERI
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[Blue Elf]

Way atxantsan! Slä pelun ngal ke yolem tsat mì hìng alu Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw. Ke tok pxaya pamreltul tsantsenget....
Also:

She squeezed her hands together        POEL FA MESYOKXIT 'AWSITENG
And made two suns in the sky        NGAMOP MESAWKETI A MÌ SAW

She by two hands together
created two suns in the sky

[Alyara Arati]

Way atxantsan! Slä pelun ngal ke yolem tsat mì hìng alu Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw? Ke tok pxaya pamreltul tsatsenget....

Another alternative here would be to say:

She squeezed her hands together        POEL MESYOKXIT 'AWSTENGYAMEM
And made two suns in the sky        ULTE NGAMOP MESAWKETI A MÌ SAW

She put two hands together
And created two suns in the sky

[Ateyo Te Syaksyuk]

Way atxantsan! Slä pelun ngal ke yolem tsat mì hìng alu Pamrel nìNa'vi nì'aw? Ke tok pxaya pamreltul tsatsenget....

Another alternative here would be to say:

She squeezed her hands together        POEL MESYOKXIT 'AWSTENGYAMEM
And made two suns in the sky        ULTE NGAMOP MESAWKETI A MÌ SAW

She put two hands together
And created two suns in the sky

Irayo for the invite, Ma Alyara~  I hadn't considered it, namely because I would feel like an imposter!
It took two days to write it and do not consider myself fluent at all.  But it is true: it is Navi, butTirea Aean is responsibility for advising my on my grammar and syntax!! Kxawm, trray!