A Great Leonopteryx and a house.

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Syatikrel

Srake fpom lu tsawla toruk hì'ia kelkumì a tok 'Rrtat?

Syatikrel [sja.ˈtik̚.ɾɛl] (Lì'fya leNa'vi Nä'rìngä)/Shatikrel [ʃa.ˈtik̚.ɾɛl] (Lì'fya leNa'vi Wione)
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Oel teyra tawsìpit aean ke txula set slä tsun hìkrrmaw fu maw krr atxan.

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Toliman

Quote from: teyra tawsìp aean on January 17, 2023, 09:05:37 PMSrake fpom lu tsawla torukur hì'ia kelkumì a tok 'Rrtat?
I would say it' s almost right (just toruk-ur instead toruk) :)

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Quote from: Toliman on January 17, 2023, 11:06:27 PM
Quote from: teyra tawsìp aean on January 17, 2023, 09:05:37 PMSrake fpom lu tsawla torukur hì'ia kelkumì a tok 'Rrtat?
I would say it' s almost right (just toruk-ur instead toruk) :)
IMHO there is still missing connection between toruk and his house - in Na'vi is used "a" marker.
In English we say just Toruk in the house is fine, but Na'vi says: Toruk which is in the house is fine.

So correct should be Srake fpom lu tsawla torukur a hì'ia kelkumì a tok 'Rrtat? or any other version with different word order.
My preferred version would be: "Srake lu fpom tsawla torukur  a mì hì'ia kelku a tok 'Rrtat?"
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)