Dialogue translation 2

[JforA]

Hello again. Need some more help with translating here. I have a human greeting a Na'vi woman and he says, "Kaltxì, ma tsmuke. Ngaru lu fpom srak."

Now the woman is a bit confused as it's a human addressing her, so her response is along the lines of "I would have some questions for my father, if I was your sister." She's polite but doesn't like the familiarity.
Any suggestions would be much appreciated.

[Also, how does one introduce themselves as "I am ___'s, mate." Asking for a friend. XD.]

[Syatikrel]

Spoiler: Oeyä tìralpeng

"Zun ngeyä tsmuke oe livu zel oeyä sempulìri oe pivawm."

[JforA]

Spoiler: Oeyä tìralpeng

"Zun ngeyä tsmuke oe livu zel oeyä sempulìri oe pivawm."

Thank you so much! 

[Toliman]

[Also, how does one introduce themselves as "I am ___'s, mate." Asking for a friend. XD.]

Oe lu ___yä, ma 'eylan

[JforA]

[Also, how does one introduce themselves as "I am ___'s, mate." Asking for a friend. XD.]

Oe lu ___yä, ma 'eylan

So like, Oe lu Takukyä, ma 'eylan. I be of Takuk, my friend. So is the word for wife (muntxate) not needed?

[Toliman]

[Also, how does one introduce themselves as "I am ___'s, mate." Asking for a friend. XD.]

Oe lu ___yä, ma 'eylan

So like, Oe lu Takukyä, ma 'eylan. I be of Takuk, my friend. So is the word for wife (muntxate) not needed?

Oe lu Takukä means just I am Takuk's
I am Takuk's wife is Oe lu Takukä muntxate

[JforA]

[Also, how does one introduce themselves as "I am ___'s, mate." Asking for a friend. XD.]

Oe lu ___yä, ma 'eylan

So like, Oe lu Takukyä, ma 'eylan. I be of Takuk, my friend. So is the word for wife (muntxate) not needed?

Oe lu Takukä means just I am Takuk's
I am Takuk's wife is Oe lu Takukä muntxate

Irayo! Hey since I have you, I know you're really good at Na'vi poetry; may I trouble you for help with a line?

Ngeyä nari lu tsawke arimna

I'm trying to say, your eyes are like sunshine.

[Toliman]

Irayo ulte kea tìkin

It would be: Ngeyä nari lu na tsawke arim or Ngeyä nari lu tsawkena arim

[Ricardo]

Why isn't it "menari"?

[Toliman]

Why isn't it "menari"?

Good idea, it literarly means two eyes.

[Syatikrel]

Why isn't it "menari"?

Good idea, it literarly means two eyes.

Lì'uri alu menari, 'u alu plural lekin ke lu kefyak.

[Toliman]

Why isn't it "menari"?

Good idea, it literarly means two eyes.

Lì'uri alu menari, 'u alu plural lekin ke lu kefyak.

Me+ is dual, here (menari, we have two eyes) it's quite good to use  

[Blue Elf]

Zun ngeyä tsmuke oe livu zel oeyä sempulìri oe pivawm.

I not sure it is fully correct, better seem to me:
Zun ngeyä tsmuke oe livu zel oeyä sempulur oel sìpawmot pivawm.

So like, Oe lu Takukyä, ma 'eylan. I be of Takuk, my friend. So is the word for wife (muntxate) not needed?

Oe lu Takukä means just I am Takuk's
I am Takuk's wife is Oe lu Takukä muntxate

Muntxate is not wife only, but also female spouse, so it fits here well.

[Blue Elf]

Why isn't it "menari"?

Good idea, it literarly means two eyes.

Lì'uri alu menari, 'u alu plural lekin ke lu kefyak.

Exactly. Na'vi distinguish number carefully, so if we speak obou two eyes (as in You have beautifull eyes), Na'vi always use menari.

[Blue Elf]

Ngeyä nari lu tsawke arimna

I'm trying to say, your eyes are like sunshine.

Oh, here's millions ways how to say that (okay, not so much  ):
Ngeyä menari lu pxel tsawke arim
Ngeyä menari nrr pxel tsawke (arim)
Menari ngeyä lam oer na sänrr tsawkeyä
Menarir ngeyä lu sänrr tsawkeyä
Tsawke nrr menarimì ngeyä
Nrr menari ngeyä pxel tsawke a mì saw

I think still more variations can be created - choose what fits for you.

[Toliman]

Nice ideas

Ngeyä menari lu pxel tsawke amuve
Ngeyä menari lu pxel mesawke arim